Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague words like "behold" and redundant phrases. Also check grammar (e.g., "sit close" should be "sit by the window" or "sit near the window") and sentence flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to sit by the window when I travel. Firstly, I enjoy the view of the landscape and towns passing by, which makes the journey more interesting. Secondly, I like the fresh air and a little privacy, so sitting by the window feels more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Provide a complete, coherent answer: begin with a direct response, then give specific details about a memorable trip and link ideas with words like "because" or "so." Fix grammar ("committed long distances" is incorrect — use "travelled long distances") and avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

Ví dụ: Yes, we often travelled long distances by bus when I was a child. For example, we used to take a six-hour bus trip to visit my grandparents every summer, and because the windows were usually closed, we passed the time chatting, playing card games and looking at photos to keep ourselves entertained.

× So usually when travelling I like to sit close.

✓ So usually when travelling I like to sit close to the window.

The original sentence is missing a prepositional complement after 'sit close'. This is an incorrect use of sentence structure (related to verb + preposition). Adding 'to the window' completes the idea and makes the sentence natural.

× I like to sit by the window because of the refreshing air that I get and I'm also able to have a good view of the road as well as the environment.

✓ I like to sit by the window because of the refreshing air I get, and I can also have a good view of the road and the surroundings.

The original is wordy and uses 'as well as the environment' awkwardly. Replace 'I'm also able to have' with the simpler modal-like phrase 'I can also have' and use 'surroundings' instead of 'the environment' for a natural collocation. This corrects adverb/adjective and phrasing issues.

× I also like to behold.

✓ I also like to look at the scenery.

'Behold' is archaic and normally requires an object (what you behold). The sentence lacks a clear object, creating a sentence structure error. Replacing with 'look at the scenery' supplies a natural verb-object structure.

× Yes, I was a child.

✓ Yes, when I was a child.

The original short sentence is grammatically correct but contextually incomplete as an answer to 'Did you have a long journey with your family as a child?'. Adding 'when' makes it a proper temporal clause that fits the question and tense.

× We always committed long distances by bus, so when we commute most times the windows are not usually open.

✓ We always covered long distances by bus, so when we commuted most of the time the windows were usually not open.

'Committed long distances' is incorrect collocation; use 'covered long distances'. Also tense consistency: describe past habit with past tense 'commuted' and 'were'. 'Most times' should be 'most of the time' for natural adverbial phrase. This fixes verb choice and past tense issues.

× So we just enjoyed the.

✓ So we just enjoyed the ride.

The original sentence ends abruptly and lacks an object after 'enjoyed the', causing a sentence structure error. Adding 'ride' (or 'journey') completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.