Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, start with a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Also correct collocation (sit by/next to the window) and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel, especially on planes. For example, I enjoy looking at the clouds and the landscape below because it helps me relax and pass the time. Therefore, I often choose a window seat when booking flights.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words to explain why. Correct phrasing (employment problems, we often went to the countryside) and avoid vague statements.

Ví dụ: Not really; we did not take many long trips when I was a child. Because my parents had employment problems, we usually stayed nearby and sometimes went to the countryside for short visits, which were relaxing but not very long.

× Yes, particularly when I travel by plane and I sit near with window and I always like to see the sky from this view.

✓ Yes, particularly when I travel by plane: I sit near the window and I always like to see the sky from that view.

The phrase 'sit near with window' uses incorrect prepositions and word order. Use 'sit near the window' (preposition 'near' + definite article + noun). Also 'this view' is less natural than 'that view' when referring to a view seen from a distance. Suggestion: place the prepositional phrase correctly ('sit near the window') and choose the appropriate demonstrative ('that view') for clarity. Additionally, combine clauses with correct punctuation or conjunctions: 'particularly when I travel by plane: I sit near the window...' to make the sentence clearer.

× Not especially when I was young. My family had an issue with employment and we often went in the countryside.

✓ Not especially when I was young. My family had employment issues and we often went to the countryside.

'Had an issue with employment' is grammatically acceptable but awkward; 'had employment issues' is clearer. More importantly, the preposition 'in the countryside' is incorrect for movement; use 'to the countryside' to indicate going to that place. Also plural 'issues' better reflects a recurring problem. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('employment issues') and the correct preposition of movement ('to').