Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından nedeninizi mantıklı bağlaçlarla destekleyin. Sözdizimi ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin; gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın. Örneğin “I prefer window seats because I like the view” gibi net bir ifade ile başlayın ve sonra ‘because’ veya ‘so’ gibi bağlaçlarla bir sebep veya kısa detay ekleyin. Ayrıca “from the front side” ifadesi belirsiz; bunun yerine “near the front of the plane/train” gibi net konum verin. Cümle sayısını 3–4’te tutun ve tekrar eden kelimeleri (choose, choose) düzeltin.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer a window seat because I enjoy looking at the scenery during the journey. For long trips, I find it more relaxing since I can watch landscapes change, so time passes more quickly.

Gợi ý: Bu cevabı açık, kronolojik bir yapı ile yeniden düzenleyin: önce kısa bir onay/konu cümlesi, sonra tarih/zaman bilgisi ve ardından spesifik ayrıntılar verin. Gereksiz dolgu seslerinden (uh, um) kaçının. Coğrafi isimleri doğru kullanın ve belirsiz veya tekrar eden ifadeleri düzeltin. Örneğin hangi yıl veya kaç yaşında olduğunuzu, nereye gittiğinizi ve yolculuğun ne kadar sürdüğünü belirtebilirsiniz. Cümleleri 2–4 arasında tutun ve bağlaçlar (when, because, so) kullanarak akışı sağlayın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember one long family trip when I was about eight. We drove to Biloxi on the coast for a week, and I remember being fascinated by the beaches and the local seafood. It was a memorable trip because we spent a lot of time together exploring the town.

× Especially, I choose them because I like to see around when I get a tickets from somewhere to somewhere.

✓ Especially, I choose them because I like to look around when I get a ticket for a journey.

The sentence has multiple problems: 'see around' is an unnatural verb choice; 'get a tickets' mixes singular and plural articles and nouns. According to the listed types, focus on pronoun/noun agreement and article use. Use 'look around' to mean observing scenery. Use 'a ticket' (singular) and 'for a journey' or 'to travel' to express purpose. Improve fluency by simplifying phrase order. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I choose window seats from the front side.

✓ I choose window seats at the front.

'From the front side' is awkward and unidiomatic; 'front' is sufficient. 'Window seats' (plural) is fine if speaking generally. Change to 'at the front' to express location of the seats. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, uh, I have remember it uh, one day in past uh, we went to Biloxi region, uh, or together soon and Samsung Samsung is a big city on in the Lake City region and uh, its population and industry is.

✓ Yes, I remember it. One day in the past we went to the Biloxi region together. Samsung is a big city in the Lake City region, and it has a large population and industry.

The original mixes present perfect 'have remember' (incorrect form) and past reference. Use simple present 'I remember' or past 'I remembered'; here 'I remember it' is natural. 'One day in past' needs article and order: 'One day in the past'. 'We went' is correct for past. 'or together soon' is meaningless and removed. 'Samsung Samsung' repetition removed. 'is a big city on in the Lake City region' corrected to 'in the Lake City region'. 'its population and industry is' must be 'it has a large population and industry' for correct verb and clarity. Errors addressed: past tense form and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:5