Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Работайте над грамматикой и связностью. В вашем ответе есть ошибки в использовании времен (present simple vs present continuous), артиклей и согласовании (например, "it's very interesting look out" должно быть "it's very interesting to look out"). Также избегайте тавтологии и нечетких слов («atmospheres», «it's can be»). Постройте предложение с четкой темой, затем добавьте одно-две конкретные детали, используя связки (for example, because, when). Практикуйте сокращение ответов до 2–4 предложений, используя правильные предлоги и инфинитивы.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. I enjoy watching the changing landscape because it helps me relax and talk with my travel companion. For example, I like noticing small villages and fields as we pass them, which makes the journey more pleasant.

Gợi ý: Исправьте лексические и структурные ошибки; некоторые слова используются неправильно или некорректно (например, "Skinner", "this scheduler"). Сформулируйте прямое утверждение, затем объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Используйте связующие слова (because, so, for example) и избегайте повторов. Следите за формами глаголов и существительными (take photos, give memories → create memories).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting places. For example, last month I photographed a colorful field and a small church while driving through the countryside, and those pictures help me recall the trip later.

Gợi ý: Улучшите четкость высказывания и порядок слов. В вашем ответе много лишних фраз и грамматических ошибок (например, "it's mountains a long distance", "a lot of many"). Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину с одной-двумя конкретными деталями. Избегайте бессвязных вставок ("a relaxed songs for me it sounds"). Практикуйте использование сравнений и единообразных форм (I prefer the mountains because... First, ... Second, ...).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I find them more relaxing and peaceful. For example, I enjoy hiking there with my family and appreciating the wide views and fresh air, which helps me unwind better than a beach holiday.

× Yes, of course, because it's very interesting look out the window especially when I traveling with my car, sometimes it's can be more atmospheres and just talk with someone.

✓ Yes, of course, because it's very interesting to look out the window, especially when I travel by car; sometimes it can be more atmospheric and I just talk with someone.

The original has incorrect verb forms and infinitive use. Use 'to look' after 'interesting' and base form 'travel' for present simple. 'It's can be' is incorrect; use 'it can be'. 'Atmospheres' should be the adjective 'atmospheric'. Also punctuation and sentence flow were improved.

× So yes, because it's give more atmosphere in the traveling time.

✓ So yes, because it gives more atmosphere while travelling.

Use third-person singular present 'gives' (subject-verb agreement) rather than 'give'. 'Travelling' can be used as a gerund after 'while' to indicate time. Simplified phrasing improves clarity.

× Yes, of course, take photos of Skinner outside the car window.

✓ Yes, of course, I take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

The student omitted the subject 'I' and used 'Skinner' mistakenly instead of 'scenery'. Use simple present 'take' for habitual action and include subject.

× It's very interesting and I really enjoy this action from a perspective I doing this action due to this this scheduler it's very perfectly and it's beautiful view.

✓ It's very interesting and I really enjoy doing this because the timing is perfect and the view is beautiful.

The original is wordy and ungrammatical: 'I doing' should be 'doing' or 'I enjoy doing this'; 'due to this this scheduler' is unclear—replace with 'because the timing is perfect'. Use simple clause structures for clarity.

× So it's give a lot of memorabilia for the future.

✓ So it gives a lot of memories for the future.

Use third-person singular 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). 'Memorabilia' is typically physical keepsakes; 'memories' suits the context. 'For the future' can remain but is simplified.

× I prefer the mountains because I can relax with my friends or my family and however it's mountains a long distance from my home as a Mountain High can see the a lot of many beautiful view, so it's very give me a comfortable and perfectly also a relaxed songs for me it sounds.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I can relax with my friends or family. However, the mountains are a long distance from my home. From a high point I can see many beautiful views, so they make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Multiple issues: use 'prefer' present simple is correct; change 'it's mountains a long distance' to 'the mountains are a long distance' (subject-verb agreement and article). 'Can see the a lot of many beautiful view' corrected to 'can see many beautiful views' (plural and quantifier). 'It's very give me' corrected to 'they make me feel' and 'relaxed' used as adjective. Sentence split improves readability.