Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a linking word. Avoid repetition ("when travelling by bus or car" repeated). Use varied vocabulary (e.g. "enjoy", "landscape", "relaxing").

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes like fields and small towns because it helps me relax and pass the time.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and combine short sentences into one coherent answer. Begin with a clear present-tense topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example with a linking word. Avoid fragmented sentences and vague phrases like "to experience it."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to capture memorable views. For instance, I usually photograph interesting buildings or colorful sunsets so I can look back at them later.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, use correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a specific supporting detail. Remove unclear words (e.g. "Portas") and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to add a reason or short example.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love watching sunsets over the water. For example, I often walk along the beach in the evening to enjoy the colors and take photos of the horizon.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I like seeing some beautiful views.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I like seeing beautiful views.

The original sentence has minor preposition and article usage issues. Use 'look out of the window' (preferred idiom) and plural 'views' is fine but the extra 'some' is unnecessary and slightly informal. Suggestion: remove 'some' and use 'look out of the window' for natural phrasing. ID:6

× Yes, I always took photos of the scenery outside the car. Because I like to see some beautiful view and to experience it.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside the car because I like to see beautiful views and experience them.

The response should match the present habitual context of the question, so use present simple 'take' not past 'took' (past tense error). Also, combine the fragments into one sentence instead of a sentence fragment starting with 'Because'. Use plural 'views' and 'experience them' to agree with plural noun. ID:5

× I prefer the sea because I like the sunset and I always take the Portas when I always see the beautiful view.

✓ I prefer the sea because I like the sunsets and I always take photos when I see a beautiful view.

Multiple problems: tense and word choice. 'Sunset' in general preference is better as plural 'sunsets'. 'Portas' appears to be a misspelling or wrong word; likely intended 'photos'. Remove repeated 'always' and use 'when I see a beautiful view' (singular or plural depending on meaning). Ensure present simple for habitual actions. ID:6