Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like “uh” and redundant phrases. Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “look out of the window”, “take pictures”).

Ví dụ: Yes — I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and interesting landscapes because they remind me of places I have visited and make the journey more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear present-tense statement, then one specific reason and a short example. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing (e.g., “I often take pictures” not “I took the pictures”). Remove repetition and unclear phrases like “we can captive with us.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because I like to capture beautiful scenes. For instance, last month I photographed a colorful valley at sunset so I can remember the trip later.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then one clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Fix grammar and word order (e.g., “I prefer the mountains” not “I usually prefer to go to the mountains”). Reduce hesitations and avoid contradictions like “never often.”

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I grew up near Himachal Pradesh where there are many hills and fresh air. For example, I often visit nearby valleys for hiking and to enjoy the peaceful scenery.

× Definitely when I go out by bus or car, uh, I usually look out to my window and I just click the pictures of the scenery and I like the views, whatever it is, sunset or sunrise. So I love that scenic views.

✓ Definitely when I go out by bus or car, I usually look out of my window and I just take pictures of the scenery; I like the views, whether it is sunset or sunrise. So I love those scenic views.

Use of -ing form is not the main issue here; the primary problems are preposition choice, verb choice, determiner and plural reference. 'Look out to my window' should be 'look out of my window' (incorrect preposition). 'Click the pictures' is nonstandard in English; use 'take pictures' (verb choice). 'Whatever it is' is better as 'whether it is' for choices. 'That scenic views' mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun; use 'those scenic views'. Suggestion: focus on correct prepositions ('out of'), common collocations ('take pictures'), and matching demonstratives with plural nouns.

× Definitely I took the pictures when I see out to the car window and there are lots of pictures I had because the pictures are very beautiful and also they show our memory and long term we can captive with us. And so these are the pictures a lot of pictures with me.

✓ Definitely I took pictures when I looked out of the car window and I have a lot of photos because they are very beautiful and they show our memories; in the long term we can keep them with us. So I have many pictures with me.

Multiple tense errors: 'took' (past) should align with 'looked' (past) rather than 'see' (present). Use present perfect 'I have a lot of photos' to express possession up to now. 'Show our memory' should be 'show our memories' (plural). 'Long term we can captive with us' is incorrect; use 'in the long term we can keep them with us' (correct verb and phrasing). Also improve word order and reduce repetition. Suggestion: ensure verbs in the same clause use consistent tense and use appropriate verbs for possession and retention ('have', 'keep').

× I took the pictures when I see out to the car window

✓ I took pictures when I looked out of the car window

'See out to the car window' uses wrong verb and preposition. Correct verb is 'look' and correct preposition is 'out of' for looking through a window. Also tense should be past 'looked' to match 'took'. Suggestion: use 'looked out of the car window' for past events and 'look out of' for the action of observing through a window.

× they show our memory and long term we can captive with us

✓ they show our memories, and in the long term we can keep them with us

Pronoun and noun number errors: 'memory' should be plural 'memories' to match 'they'. 'We can captive with us' is ungrammatical; 'captive' is not a verb meaning 'keep'. Use 'keep them with us' where 'them' refers back to 'photos'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use correct verbs ('keep').

× So I love that scenic views.

✓ So I love those scenic views.

'That' is a singular demonstrative adjective, but 'views' is plural. Use 'those' to modify plural nouns. Suggestion: match demonstratives with noun number: 'this/that' for singular, 'these/those' for plural.

× And so these are the pictures a lot of pictures with me.

✓ So these are the pictures; I have many pictures with me.

Awkward phrasing and pronoun use. 'These are the pictures a lot of pictures with me' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Separate into clear clauses: identify the pictures and state possession. Use 'I have many pictures with me' or 'I have many pictures'. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same noun and ensure the pronoun or subject is clear.

× I usually prefer to go to the mountains and also, uh, near, near my hometown, there were, uh, Himachal Pradesh, uh, and there are lots of mountains, but uh, in my area, there is no any sea, so I never often go to sea. I often live, uh, visit the mountains.

✓ I usually prefer to go to the mountains. Near my hometown, Himachal Pradesh, there are many mountains, but in my area there is no sea, so I rarely go to the sea. I often visit the mountains.

Article and determiners errors: 'there were, Himachal Pradesh' should be 'near my hometown, Himachal Pradesh, there are many mountains' and use present 'are' for general fact. 'There is no any sea' is incorrect; use 'there is no sea' or 'there isn't any sea'. 'Never often' is contradictory; use 'rarely'. 'Go to sea' needs 'the sea' in this context. Also 'I often live, visit' incorrect; remove 'live'. Suggestion: use correct articles ('the sea') and adverbs of frequency appropriately ('rarely' instead of 'never often'). Ensure tense fits general facts (present simple).