Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, limit to 3–4 sentences, and use linking words to connect ideas. Be more specific with examples (e.g. what details you notice).

Ví dụ: Yes. I usually look out of the window when I travel by car because I enjoy taking in the scenery and relaxing. For example, on long journeys to the countryside I like watching fields and small villages, which lets me notice everyday details like people working or children playing. This helps me feel calm and more connected to the place.

Gợi ý: Fix vocabulary errors and content coherence. Say what you actually photograph (landscapes, landmarks) and avoid unrelated words. Use 2–3 sentences with a linking phrase to explain why you take photos.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph the landscape outside the window, such as rolling hills or interesting buildings, to capture memories of a trip. These photos help preserve the feeling of traveling and remind me of special moments from the journey.

Gợi ý: Minor grammar and word-choice corrections and add a brief specific example or comparison. Keep it concise and use a linking word to expand slightly.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I love the lush greenery and fresh air. The mountain climate is cooler and more peaceful, so I find it more relaxing than the busy seaside; for example, I enjoy hiking on quiet trails rather than crowded beaches.

× Car I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy taking in the scenery and relaxing, for example on long journals to the countryside.

✓ I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy taking in the scenery and relaxing, for example on long journeys to the countryside.

The original sentence begins with an isolated word 'Car' which makes sentence structure incorrect (ID 26). Also 'journals' is a wrong word form; the correct noun is 'journeys'. Suggestion: remove the stray 'Car' and replace 'journals' with 'journeys' to make the sentence coherent and accurate.

× I like watching the fields and small villages low by which help me and with and notice more detail of daily life.

✓ I like watching the fields and small villages nearby, which helps me notice more details of daily life.

This sentence has multiple preposition and relative clause errors (ID 11). 'low by' is incorrect; use 'nearby'. The relative clause 'which help me and with and notice' is ungrammatical: subject-verb agreement and extraneous words. Change 'which help me notice more details' and pluralize 'details'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement 'which helps' refers to the act of watching.

× Yes, I often photograph the wheel outside the car window to capture memorable landscape during a trip.

✓ Yes, I often photograph the view outside the car window to capture memorable landscapes during a trip.

The noun 'wheel' is incorrect for scenery; use 'view' (ID 10 addresses present participle but primary issue here is wrong lexical choice). Also 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'memorable' and general sense. Suggestion: use 'view' and 'landscapes' to convey intended meaning.

× Those photos help me preserve the feeling of traveling and remind me of special cakes I passes.

✓ Those photos help me preserve the feeling of traveling and remind me of special places I passed.

The phrase 'cakes I passes' contains two errors: wrong noun 'cakes' instead of 'places' and incorrect past tense 'passes' should be 'passed' (ID 5). Suggestion: replace 'cakes' with 'places' and use past tense 'passed' when referring to things seen in past trips.

× The mountain climates is cooler and more peaceful so I find it more relaxing than the busy seaside.

✓ The mountain climate is cooler and more peaceful, so I find it more relaxing than the busy seaside.

'Mountain climates is' shows subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) and incorrect plurality: use singular 'climate' with singular verb 'is'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'climate is' or 'mountain climates are' depending on meaning; here singular fits best.