Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific details. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g. avoid double words, fix infinitive use). Use a linking word when adding a reason. Aim for 2–3 sentences total.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I'm travelling because I enjoy seeing new places. For example, I like watching changing buildings and landscapes, which helps me relax and notice local life.

Gợi ý: Clarify and simplify your answer. Start with a direct statement, then give a specific reason and a concrete example. Remove repetitions and filler words and correct grammar (e.g. "make me strange memorable" → "help me remember the trip"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because they help me remember the trip. For instance, I photograph unusual buildings or sunsets and later look at the pictures to feel like I'm back there.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two specific, well-formed reasons using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g. "saw a view" → "see the view"). Keep responses coherent and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. Also, I love seeing wide ocean views from the shore, which makes me feel calm and refreshed.

× Yes, I usually look out out the window while I'm traveling because it can make me to have a new, uh, a new view about.

✓ Yes, I usually look out the window while I'm traveling because it can give me a new perspective.

Original errors: double 'out', unnecessary 'to' after 'make', awkward phrasing 'a new view about'. This is mainly about verb+ -ing and verb usage. Use 'look out the window' (single 'out'), keep present continuous 'I'm traveling' which is correct, and use 'give me a new perspective' to express the idea naturally. Avoid 'make me to have'—English uses 'make someone do' (bare infinitive) or better verbs like 'give'. Suggestions: remove duplicated words, do not insert 'to' after 'make', and use natural collocations such as 'give a new perspective'.

× Yes, of course, I usually take a photo, uh, outside. This can uh, make me strange memorable and also when I, when I, when I see this again, that I can make me feel like I'm again today.

✓ Yes, of course, I usually take photos of the view outside. These photos can be memorably strange, and when I see them again they can make me feel as if I am there today.

Problems include incorrect article/number use ('a photo' -> 'photos' or 'a photo of the view'), awkward phrase 'make me strange memorable' and repetitive filler. This involves article/quantifier choices and sentence structure. Use plural 'photos' if habitual, or 'a photo' with specification. 'These photos' (plural referent) matches 'them'. Use 'make me feel as if I am there' for clarity. Suggestions: choose correct singular/plural forms based on meaning, reorder phrases for natural English, and avoid repetition and fillers.

× I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming, this can make me relaxing and also I like to saw a view or on top the on top of the beach.

✓ I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming; it helps me relax, and I also like to see the view from the top of the beach.

Errors: comma splice and incorrect verb forms ('can make me relaxing' should be 'helps me relax' or 'makes me feel relaxed'), wrong verb 'saw' (past tense) used instead of 'see', and awkward 'on top the on top of the beach'. This falls under present/past participle and verb choice issues as well as sentence structure. Suggestions: use correct verb forms ('relax' not 'relaxing' after 'make me' or use 'makes me relaxed'), replace 'saw' with 'see', fix prepositional phrase to 'from the top of the beach' or 'on top of the beach', and join clauses properly (use semicolon or conjunction).