Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且准确地回应问题，避免不相关或错误的词汇（如“training skill”）。可以用主题句开头说明习惯，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，如为什么放松、看到什么样的景色。句子控制在最多五句，使用衔接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching people on the streets and the changing architecture, which makes the journey interesting. Also, looking outside helps me feel less bored on long trips.

Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰和语法正确。避免使用含糊或错误的词（如“secret”、“sequins”）。先简短回答是否拍照，然后说明何时、拍什么和原因，最多五句并使用衔接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I see interesting buildings or colorful streets. I usually use my phone to capture quick shots because the view changes fast. Taking photos helps me remember the places I pass by.

Gợi ý: 回答应先直接表明偏好，然后用一两句具体原因支持，避免不完整或不自然的句子（如“And the sea made me”）。用更恰当的词汇描述感受并给出例子或比较。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I find the ocean very calming and I love the sound of the waves. For example, I enjoy walking on the beach at sunset and the open view makes me feel peaceful.

× I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the training skill makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the travelling scenery makes me feel relaxed and happy.

原句中“the training skill”显然是错误搭配或拼写，应为与“看窗外风景”相关的名词短语。这里应使用“travelling scenery”（旅行的风景）或直接说“the scenery”。另外保留动名词“looking”是正确的，因为动词 enjoy 后需接动名词。建议检查词汇拼写并用与语境匹配的名词替换。

× It also helps me pass the time and not notice interesting details about the city or countryside.

✓ It also helps me pass the time and notice interesting details about the city or countryside.

原句中使用“and not notice”与前半句逻辑相反，且语意不通。应为“helps me pass the time and notice…”，表示既消磨时间又能注意到有趣的细节。建议调整并列结构使意义一致。

× Yes, of course, I think take photos of the secret outside the car windows, which it is very funny things.

✓ Yes, of course. I think taking photos of the scenery outside the car windows is very fun.

原句结构混乱：动词后缺少动名词形式，应为“taking photos”；“secret”用词不当，应为“scenery（风景）”；“which it is very funny things”语法错误且冗余，正确表达为“is very fun”。建议使用简洁主谓结构并用恰当名词。

× I think sequins outside or inside is very beautiful places.

✓ I think scenes outside or inside are very beautiful.

原句使用“sequins”（亮片）错误，应为“scenes（场景/景色）”；主谓不一致，“is very beautiful places”同时有单数系动词和复数名词，需改为“are very beautiful”。此外不应重复“places”与“beautiful”冲突，简化为“are very beautiful”。建议注意词汇选择并保持主谓一致。

× No, I prefer the sea to mountains because I think the sea is very beautiful and the sea water is my perfect color.

✓ No, I prefer the sea to the mountains because I think the sea is very beautiful and the seawater is my perfect color.

句中缺少定冠词“the mountains”表示特指山；“sea water”可合写为“seawater”或写作“the sea water”，但更自然为“seawater”。主谓一致方面句子可改为上述形式。建议在比较时在可数名词前使用定冠词并注意词的拼写和连写规则。

× And the sea made me.

✓ And the sea makes me happy.

原句“the sea made me”不完整，缺少宾语说明“made me (feel ...)”。时态也应与前句一致，表示习惯性感受用一般现在时“makes”。建议补充情感或状态（如“happy”）并使用正确时态。