Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar and word choice errors, avoid filler words (uh), and keep supporting details specific and fluent. Use linking words briefly to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes. I always look out of the window when I travel with my family to other provinces. During the journey I usually watch the countryside – the blue sky and the rolling farm fields – because I find those views really interesting.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and correct vocabulary errors. Give a clear direct answer, then provide specific conditions when you take photos using linking words (for example, especially when...). Replace fillers and vague phrases with precise descriptions.

Ví dụ: Sometimes. I take photos from the car mainly when the scenery is striking—for example, when the fields are lush green or the sky looks dramatic and moody. In those moments I stop and capture the view.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with clear reasons and a brief example. Reduce fillers (um, uh, you know) and correct small grammar (prefer the sea rather than the mountains). Use linking words to explain condition and example.

Ví dụ: I like both, but it depends on the season. For instance, in summer I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach; this weekend I’m going to the seaside with friends for that reason.

× Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel with my family on Reason business trip, uh, to a province.

✓ Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel with my family on a business trip to a province.

The phrase 'Reason business trip' is incorrect and likely meant to be 'a business trip'. This is an article error and word choice problem. 'A' is required before 'business trip' because it refers to a single nonspecific trip. Also remove the extraneous word 'Reason'. Suggestion: use 'a business trip' or 'a work trip'.

× I spend the journey watching the countryside, the blue sky and the rolling farm fields, which I found quite really interesting.

✓ I spend the journey watching the countryside, the blue sky and the rolling farm fields, which I find really interesting.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I spend' with past tense 'I found'. To maintain consistent present tense use 'find' not 'found'. Also 'quite really' is redundant; choose one intensifier. Suggestion: use 'find really interesting' or 'find quite interesting'.

× It, it depends. Uh, sometimes I do take photos of the scenery outside the car. Uh, especially when I see the rolling farm feel full of green or the sky is, uh, kind of gloomy, you know?

✓ It depends. Sometimes I do take photos of the scenery outside the car, especially when I see the rolling farmland full of green or when the sky is kind of gloomy.

Multiple issues: 'It, it depends' has repetition (sentence structure) but within allowed list we correct verb forms and noun choice. 'Farm feel' is incorrect; correct noun is 'farmland' or 'farm fields'. Also 'full of green' is awkward; use 'full of green' acceptable but 'full of greenery' or 'covered in green' better. Added 'when' to link clauses. Suggestion: use 'rolling farmland' and 'when the sky is kind of gloomy'.

× Honestly, I prefer both and it depends on the season.

✓ Honestly, I prefer both; it depends on the season.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but punctuation improves clarity. 'Both' refers to two options (mountains and sea) so singular/plural is fine. Provide semicolon to link clauses. No major grammar change required; minor sentence-structure polishing.

× Umm, if it's summer I prefer sea uh rather than mountain.

✓ If it's summer, I prefer the sea rather than the mountains.

Use definite article 'the' with general geographical features when comparing specific categories: 'the sea' and 'the mountains'. Also match plural 'mountains' with 'both' context and comparative choice. Add comma after the conditional clause for clarity.

× And this weekend I plan to go to the sea as it's the summer season, you know, with my friends.

✓ This weekend I plan to go to the sea with my friends since it's summer.

The original is understandable but wordy. 'As it's the summer season' is awkward; 'since it's summer' is more natural. Maintain future intention 'I plan to go' which is correct. Streamline word order: place 'with my friends' directly after destination. No tense change needed.