Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Give a direct topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Be specific about why you look out the window (e.g., to relax, enjoy views, or pass time). Use correct tense and simple vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I find watching the passing landscape relaxing, and it helps me forget about the stress of the day. For example, I enjoy seeing trees and houses change as we move, which makes the journey feel shorter.

Gợi ý: The idea is clear but phrasing is awkward. Start with a clear statement, then explain when and why you take photos, using linking words (because, so, for example). Mention devices or occasions to add specificity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window because I want to keep memories of interesting places. For example, I usually use my phone to capture mountains or old buildings when we pass them during family trips.

Gợi ý: Your answer mixes ideas and has grammar and word choice mistakes. Give a clear preference or say you like both, then add specific reasons using linking words. Describe sensory details (sight, sound) concisely and correctly.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains in the evening because the views are beautiful and the air is fresh. However, I also like the sea because the sound of the waves makes me feel calm. For instance, watching the sunset from a mountain trail feels peaceful, while listening to waves helps me relax after a busy week.

× Yes, it's getting for very harmful for feeling and better.

✓ Yes, it can be very harmful for our feelings and wellbeing.

The original sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and awkward phrasing ('getting for very harmful', 'feeling and better'). Replace 'getting' with modal 'can be' to express possibility and 'very harmful' as adjective phrase. Use 'our feelings and wellbeing' for clear, natural nouns. Also remove extraneous preposition 'for' after 'getting'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yes, I like to take some photos while it's memory for our life.

✓ Yes, I like to take some photos to keep as memories of our life.

The phrase 'while it's memory for our life' misuses 'while' and 'for'. Use purpose 'to keep' and the noun 'memories' with 'of' to indicate what the memories are about. Also plural 'memories' is more natural. This fixes preposition and word choice errors. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I like to mountain units very beautiful for evening time and the sea.

✓ I like the mountains because they are very beautiful in the evening, and I also like the sea.

The original has singular/plural and word choice errors: 'mountain units' is incorrect; use 'mountains' (plural). Add article 'the' and make verb and adjective agree: 'they are very beautiful'. Use 'in the evening' for time expression. This corrects number and general sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:1

× It sounds become very calm sounds for my heart feel like very calm down.

✓ The sound of the sea becomes very calming; it makes my heart feel relaxed.

The sentence mixes verbs and adjectives awkwardly ('sounds become', 'calm sounds for my heart feel like very calm down'). Use 'becomes very calming' (adjective) and 'makes my heart feel relaxed' for natural English. Replace 'calm down' (verb phrase) with 'relaxed' as an adjective to describe the heart's feeling. This fixes misuse of adjectives/adverbs and poor verb choices. Grammar problem type ID:13