Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., "uh"), correct small grammar errors, and limit to max five sentences. Add one or two specific supporting details with a linking word to make the answer coherent (for example: "because" or "and").

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually prefer to sit by the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing scenery. For example, I like to look at old buildings in cities or green fields in the countryside, and I often listen to music quietly while I watch.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and expand with a specific reason and a linking word. Combine short repeated phrases to avoid redundancy and show a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., "relaxing" or "soothing").

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos of the scenery outside because I prefer to enjoy the view in real time. For instance, watching the landscape pass by feels more relaxing and immersive than looking at pictures later.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct grammar, give a clear topic sentence, and use linking words to connect supporting details. Be specific about activities and feelings, avoid repeating "we do"—use varied verbs and more precise vocabulary (e.g., "barbecue", "fresh air").

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy outdoor activities there and the fresh air helps me unwind. For example, my family often goes camping, has a barbecue and a picnic among the trees, which makes me feel calm and refreshed.

× 'Yes, everyone likes to sit by the window seat and enjoy beautiful scenery, landscapes, cityscapes and all that.'

✓ 'Yes, most people like to sit by the window seat and enjoy the beautiful scenery, landscapes, and cityscapes.'

'Original uses everyone (overgeneralization) and misses articles and commas. Replace everyone with most people for naturalness, add the definite article "the" before scenery and commas to separate items.'

× 'Uh, I also like to listen music with by sitting in the window seat.'

✓ 'I also like to listen to music while sitting in the window seat.'

'listen' requires the preposition to before its object (listen to music). Use while or by + -ing to indicate simultaneous actions; here while + present participle is natural. Remove extra preposition "with" and correct word order.'

× 'No, I don't take photos of the scenery outside because I want to enjoy the view in real time.'

✓ 'No, I don't take photos of the scenery outside because I want to enjoy the view in real time.'

'Sentence is grammatically correct in present simple; no change needed. It fits the meaning of a general habit.'

× 'It makes me happy and it makes me relax.'

✓ 'It makes me happy and helps me relax.'

'make someone relax' is not the most natural collocation here; 'help someone relax' or 'make me feel relaxed' are better. Also remove the second subject "it" for concision.'

× 'I like to go to mountains more because we live when we do to the mountains.'

✓ 'I prefer going to the mountains because we live close to them.'

'go to mountains' needs the definite article 'the' for specific mountains. Original phrase 'we live when we do to the mountains' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended to say they live nearby, so change to "we live close to them." Use 'prefer going to' for natural preference expression.'

× 'We camp there and we do a BBQ.'

✓ 'We camp there and have a barbecue.'

'do a BBQ' is informal and slightly nonstandard. Use 'have a barbecue' or 'have a BBQ.' Also spell out barbecue for formality; 'a' is acceptable but 'have' is the appropriate verb.'

× 'We do a picnic there and cool breeze and greenery helps me to relax very much.'

✓ 'We have a picnic there, and the cool breeze and greenery help me relax a lot.'

'do a picnic' is less natural than 'have a picnic.' Subject-verb agreement error: 'cool breeze and greenery' is a compound subject and requires plural verb 'help' not 'helps.' Remove unnecessary 'to' in 'help me relax' and replace 'very much' with 'a lot' for naturalness.'