Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatical, give a clear topic sentence, add one specific detail and use a linking phrase. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g. “the bus,” “cars have”). Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer looking out of the window when I travel by bus because the bus often follows routes that show more of the local area. For example, on my last bus trip I saw small markets and traditional houses that I would have missed by car. Also, buses usually stop at viewpoints so I can enjoy the scenery longer.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve grammar and precision. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example or purpose and use a linking word (e.g. “because” or “so”). Remove duplicate words and correct plurals and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to capture local details. For instance, I photographed colorful street murals and small cafés during a recent trip, so I can look back on those memories later.

Gợi ý: Make the response more specific and natural by giving one or two concrete reasons and an example, and avoid vague phrases like “and so on.” Use linking words (e.g. “because” and “for example”) and correct phrasing (e.g. “tree-lined landscapes” or “forest scenery”).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy forest scenery and wildlife. For example, when I hike in the mountains I often see butterflies and birds, and the fresh air helps me relax.

× I like to look out the scenery by bus because at the bus I can travel around to see the local view rather than car because cars has a fixed route.

✓ I like to look at the scenery when traveling by bus because on the bus I can travel around and see the local views, unlike cars, which have fixed routes.

Errors: incorrect prepositions ('look out the scenery' should be 'look at the scenery'; 'by bus' is acceptable but 'when traveling by bus' is clearer); incorrect article/preposition 'at the bus' should be 'on the bus'; missing conjunctions and awkward comparison 'rather than car' should be 'unlike cars'; subject-verb agreement 'cars has' should be 'cars have'. Suggestions: use 'look at' for viewing something, use 'on the bus' for being inside a vehicle, ensure comparisons use parallel structures (e.g., unlike cars), and ensure subject-verb agreement for plural subjects ('cars have').

× Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside the car windows because I can take different different photo for the neighborhood and I can record them and watch them later.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of the scenery outside car windows because I can take different photos of the neighborhood, and I can save them and look at them later.

Errors: duplicate word 'different different'; incorrect singular/plural 'photo' should be 'photos' to match 'different'; awkward preposition 'for the neighborhood' should be 'of the neighborhood'; 'record them and watch them later' is unnatural for photos — use 'save them and look at them later'. Suggestions: remove duplicate words, match plural nouns with plurals, use correct prepositions ('photos of'), and choose appropriate verbs for actions with photos ('save' or 'store', 'look at' or 'view').

× I prefer the mountains because I like nature, such as tree landscapes, and wildlife such as butterflies and so on.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I like nature, such as tree-covered landscapes and wildlife, for example butterflies.

Errors: 'tree landscapes' is not natural — use 'tree-covered landscapes' or 'forested landscapes'; redundant 'such as' and 'and so on' are repetitive; article use is acceptable but wording can be improved for clarity. Suggestions: use natural collocations ('tree-covered' or 'forested'), avoid redundancy by using one exemplifying phrase ('for example butterflies'), and keep sentence concise.