Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and complete your final thought. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Also correct basic grammar (e.g., "I feel relaxed", "it gives me a break").

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car. If the place is new to me, I enjoy observing the scenery because it helps me relax and passes the time. In addition, watching outside gives me a short mental break from work or studies.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and clarify reasons. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "tech-savvy"), correct grammar and pluralization, and connect ideas with linking words. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car. Because I am quite tech-savvy, I enjoy posting pictures on Instagram to share my experiences. Also, I like getting feedback from friends about the photos.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, then support it with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Correct vocabulary/phrasing errors ("sea" not "see", "adventurous activities", "scuba diving"). Avoid repeating the main preference unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea. I enjoy swimming and sunbathing, and I like adventurous activities such as scuba diving. In addition, I enjoy fresh seafood like grilled fish, so coastal trips suit me better than mountain holidays.

× Definitely yes. I look out the window at the beautiful scenery when I am traveling by bus or car because if it is a if it is a new place for me because I feel a relaxed and it it is a time pass activity for me. Apart from this, it also give me a break to my.

✓ Definitely yes. I look out the window at the beautiful scenery when I am traveling by bus or car because if it is a new place for me I feel relaxed and it is a pastime activity for me. Apart from that, it also gives me a break.

Errors: redundant words, incorrect verb forms and collocations, and sentence structure. 'feel a relaxed' is incorrect; use 'feel relaxed' (adjective after feel). 'time pass activity' is a nonstandard collocation; use 'pastime' or 'a way to pass the time'. 'it also give me' needs third person singular present 'gives'. Remove repeated words 'if it is a'. Also complete the final clause ('break to my' is incomplete) and replace with 'gives me a break' or 'gives me a break from studying/work.' Suggestions: remove redundancies, ensure subject-verb agreement (gives), use correct adjective/adverb placement (feel relaxed), and choose standard collocations ('pastime', 'gives me a break').

× Definitely yes, I love to capture a beautiful uh photo outside the scenery when I am travelling by a car because I am a techno city person. I like live, love to take a photo and post those photo on my Instagram site in order to take a feedback from my friends.

✓ Definitely yes, I love to capture a beautiful photo of the scenery when I am traveling by car because I am a tech-savvy person. I love to take photos and post them on my Instagram to get feedback from my friends.

Errors: article and noun-number issues and word choice. 'a beautiful uh photo outside the scenery' is awkward; use 'a beautiful photo of the scenery'. 'travelling by a car' - do not use 'a' with modes of transport: 'by car'. 'techno city person' is nonstandard; use 'tech-savvy person'. 'I like live, love to take a photo' has extraneous word 'live' and wrong verb phrases; use 'I love to take photos'. 'post those photo' should be plural and use appropriate pronoun: 'post them'. 'in order to take a feedback' is incorrect article and verb choice; use 'to get feedback' (no article). Suggestions: correct articles, match singular/plural nouns with verbs, choose natural collocations and remove filler words.

× Definitely, I prefer to see because I love swimming and sunbathing. Apart from this, I love to adventure activities such as a scuba diving. Moreover, I love to eat seafood like grilled fish. So I prefer to see as compared to mountain.

✓ Definitely, I prefer the sea because I love swimming and sunbathing. Apart from that, I enjoy adventurous activities such as scuba diving. Moreover, I love to eat seafood like grilled fish. So I prefer the sea compared to the mountains.

Errors: incorrect word choice and articles. 'prefer to see' should be 'prefer the sea' ('sea' not 'see'). 'adventure activities' should be 'adventurous activities'. 'a scuba diving' is wrong; 'scuba diving' is an uncountable noun/activity, so no article. 'as compared to mountain' should be 'compared to the mountains' and use plural 'mountains' with definite article or plural form. Suggestions: use correct vocabulary ('sea' vs 'see'), use adjective form 'adventurous', omit unnecessary articles with activities, and use consistent comparison forms ('prefer X to Y' or 'prefer X compared to Y').