Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid fragmented phrases and incorrect word forms (e.g., "what it feels like" → "because it feels").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, when I pass through rural areas I often notice green fields and small farms, which feel refreshing and peaceful.

Gợi ý: Be careful with sentence structure and repetition. Give one clear reason and a specific example, using a linking word to connect ideas. Remove filler words like "well" and correct small grammar errors ("whenever I travel").

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the window because I want to capture memorable scenes. For instance, last summer I photographed a range of mountains and a sunset while travelling through the countryside, and those pictures remind me of the trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and combine related ideas into a single coherent sentence. Use correct nouns and adjectives ("feel" → "feeling", "color" → "colors"), and avoid short fragmented sentences by linking reasons with conjunctions.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love the smell of the ocean and the relaxing feeling it gives me. Additionally, I enjoy watching the warm colours of the sunset over the water, which always makes me feel calm.

× Yes, I do enjoy looking at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car. What it feels like relaxing, especially in rural area. So refreshing and so nature.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy looking at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car. It feels relaxing, especially in rural areas. It is so refreshing and feels so natural.

The second sentence is a sentence fragment and uses incorrect structure ('What it feels like relaxing'). Replace with 'It feels relaxing' to form a complete clause. 'rural area' needs plural or an article; use 'rural areas' to match general statement. 'So refreshing and so nature' uses 'nature' (noun) where the adjective 'natural' is needed and lacks a verb; change to 'It is so refreshing and feels so natural.' Suggestions: ensure each sentence has a subject and verb, use correct adjective forms, and pluralize general nouns.

× Yes, I often take pictures of the scenery from the bus or car window. Well, whenever I'm I travel because I want to capture beautiful moments, beautiful mountains on the in the countryside.

✓ Yes, I often take pictures of the scenery from the bus or car window. Well, whenever I travel, I do so because I want to capture beautiful moments and the beautiful mountains in the countryside.

There is an extra 'I'm' before 'I travel' making the clause ungrammatical; remove the unnecessary 'I'm'. 'Because' clause was attached incorrectly; reorder to 'whenever I travel, I do so because...' Also 'on the in the countryside' is a word-order/extra preposition error; correct to 'in the countryside.' Suggestions: avoid doubling subjects and ensure correct preposition use ('in the countryside'), and place clauses in a clear sequence.

× I do prefer the sea because. I love the smell and feels, so relaxing and refreshing. And I love the sunset. I love the color, so warm and relaxing.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love the smells and the feeling; it is so relaxing and refreshing. I also love the sunset and its warm, relaxing colors.

First sentence ends with a dangling 'because' and lacks the clause completing the reason; attach the reason to form a complete sentence. 'I love the smell and feels' mixes noun and verb forms; use 'smells and the feeling' or 'the smell and the feel' and avoid plural/singular mismatch. 'So relaxing and refreshing' needs a linking verb ('it is') for completeness. 'I love the color, so warm and relaxing' should specify plural 'colors' or use a possessive for the sunset's colors; rephrase to 'its warm, relaxing colors.' Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments, ensure clauses introduced by conjunctions (like because) are completed, and match noun/adjective forms.