Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, remove filler words, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, replace "watching Rd." with "watching the road or the scenery," use "when I travel" not "when I traveling," and say what you notice (e.g., trees, houses, fields).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the road and the scenery because it helps me relax, and I especially like seeing trees and local houses along the route.

Gợi ý: Be more precise and correct tense use. Start with a direct reply, then give a specific reason and a brief detail about how you use the photos. Use linking words like "because" or "so that," and correct verb forms (e.g., "review" not "reviewed").

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember the trip. Later, when I have free time, I review the pictures to relive the journey and choose my favorites.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference with a clear topic sentence and give understandable reasons without confusing phrases. Use correct comparative phrase "prefer the sea to the mountains," correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., "I like swimming to relax" and "I'm afraid of heights" if relevant). Avoid unclear expressions like "hot boy" or "very scary hide."

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy swimming to relax on the beach. Also, I am a bit afraid of heights, so I feel more comfortable by the sea than in high, steep mountain areas.

× Yes, I like watching Rd. when I traveling by bus or in a car because I think I want to see my trip, uh, see my travel and I want to see every, uh, many trees and ecosystem around.

✓ Yes, I like watching the road when I am travelling by bus or in a car because I want to see my trip, see the scenery, and I want to see the many trees and the surrounding ecosystem.

Errors: missing auxiliary verb and wrong verb form ('I traveling' should be 'I am travelling' — present continuous requires auxiliary am/is/are); 'Rd.' is an abbreviation and should be written as 'road'; unnecessary phrase 'I think I want to see my trip, uh, see my travel' is wordy and inconsistent, simplify to 'I want to see my trip' or 'see the scenery'; 'every, uh, many trees' is incorrect quantifier use and word order — use 'the many trees'; missing definite article before 'surrounding ecosystem' — use 'the surrounding ecosystem'. Suggestion: use present continuous with correct auxiliary for ongoing actions, choose clear nouns and proper articles, and avoid filler words.

× Yes, I always take photos of the school scenery outside the car window because I want to keep many photos for this trip, for this travel and when I'm free I will reviewed my trip.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to keep many photos of this trip, and when I'm free I will review my trip.

Errors: wrong verb form 'will reviewed' — after 'will' the base form 'review' is required (future simple uses base verb); 'school scenery' is odd unless context requires 'school' — likely just 'scenery'; 'keep many photos for this trip, for this travel' is repetitive and uses incorrect preposition — use 'photos of this trip'. Suggestion: use base verb after 'will', use correct prepositions ('photos of'), and avoid repetition.

× I prefer the sea rather the mountains because I am a hot boy so I went to go to the bed for swimming for relax and I very scary hide so I don't love.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I like warm weather and I enjoy swimming to relax; I am fearful of heights, so I do not like the mountains.

Multiple issues here: 'prefer the sea rather the mountains' — incorrect conjunction; correct pattern is 'prefer X to Y' (Conjunction error/phrase usage). 'I am a hot boy' is unclear; likely intended 'I like warm weather' (word choice/adjective issue). 'so I went to go to the bed for swimming for relax' contains tense and structure errors and wrong word order — use 'I enjoy swimming to relax' (present tense preference). 'I very scary hide' is ungrammatical: should be 'I am very scared of heights' or 'I am fearful of heights' (incorrect adjective/adverb and missing preposition). 'so I don't love' should be 'so I do not like (the mountains)'. Suggestions: use 'prefer X to Y', express likes with simple present, use correct adjective 'scared' and 'of heights', and avoid unnecessary verbs like 'went to go'.