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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?

Thí sinh

Yes, because when I'm traveling on bus or car I feel very tired or boring. So I will look the scenery looking this scenery, my wood, my mood is good.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

Thí sinh

No, because by myself I don't like taking more photos. I usually take so useful photos and I think taking photos with my more time.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?

Thí sinh

I prefer the sea because if I travel to go to the mountain I must I have to climb it. But by the sea I have taken more beautiful photos. I don't like any of the sports.

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Part 1

Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,先给出主题句,再用一两句具体细节支持。避免重复和语法错误,例如把“boring”改为“bored”,将“my mood is good”改为更自然的表达。可以加入一两个连接词(because/so/which)使句子更连贯。建议控制在最多5句内。示例结构:肯定/否定 + 原因 + 具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax when I feel tired. I like watching the passing countryside and houses, which makes the journey more interesting and lifts my mood.

Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰、语法正确并提供具体原因或例子。先给出简短明确的答案(Yes/No),然后用一两句解释原因并给出例子。避免模糊或不完整的短语(如“so useful photos”不明确)。可以说明你更喜欢什么时候拍照或用手机保存回忆。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos from the car window because the pictures often turn out blurry. I prefer to take photos when I have more time and can stop at a good viewpoint, so the images are clearer and more meaningful.

Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且条理清晰,先说明偏好,再给出具体原因和例子。修正重复和语法问题(如“I must I have to climb it”)。如果提到活动或拍照,说明具体感受或比较。最后一句与前文不太相关,若想表达不喜欢运动,应更自然地连接上文。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I find it more relaxing and easier to enjoy — you don't need to hike to see beautiful views. I also like taking photos of the coastline and sunsets, which are often more impressive than mountain shots for me.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, because when I'm traveling on bus or car I feel very tired or boring.

Yes, because when I'm traveling by bus or car I feel very tired or bored.

原句问题:使用了形容词/分词不当与介词错误。具体为“on bus or car”应使用介词“by”表示交通方式;“boring”是“令人感到无聊的(事物)”,而说话人感到无聊应使用“bored”。建议:交通工具用“by + 交通工具”,描述感受用“bored”而非“boring”。

Verb in the present participle form

× So I will look the scenery looking this scenery, my wood, my mood is good.

So I will look at the scenery; looking at the scenery improves my mood.

原句问题:动词短语和介词使用错误(缺少“at”),重复冗余并且有拼写/词汇错误(“wood”应为“mood”)。建议:观察景色用短语“look at the scenery”;表达“使心情变好”可用“improves my mood”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, because by myself I don't like taking more photos.

No, because I myself don't like taking many photos.

原句问题:代词/短语使用不当。“by myself”通常表示“独自”,但句意为“我个人不喜欢拍很多照片”,应使用“I myself”或“personally”。此外“more photos”不符合语境,应改为“many photos”。建议:用“I myself”或“personally”表明个人观点,使用“many”表示数量多。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I usually take so useful photos and I think taking photos with my more time.

I usually take very useful photos and I think I need more time to take photos.

原句问题:副词和形容词搭配不当(“so useful”在此表达显得不自然,建议用“very useful”或“useful photos”);后半句语序和结构错误(“taking photos with my more time”不符合英语习惯),应表达为“我需要更多时间来拍照”。建议:使用固定表达“need more time to do something”;修正为“I think I need more time to take photos”。

Plural and article/verb issues

× I prefer the sea because if I travel to go to the mountain I must I have to climb it.

I prefer the sea because if I travel to the mountains I have to climb them.

原句问题:名词单复数与冠词使用错误(一般说“the mountains”或“a mountain”,原句中“the mountain”与后文代词不一致);冗余的情态动词表达“must I have to”重复使用。建议:使用“have to”或“must”之一,且使名词与代词数一致(“mountains”与“them”或“a mountain”与“it”)。

Verb in the present participle form

× But by the sea I have taken more beautiful photos.

But at the seaside I have taken many more beautiful photos.

原句问题:介词和搭配问题。“by the sea”可以,但“at the seaside”更自然;“have taken more beautiful photos”中“more”比较级用法不明确,若与山相比应为“many more”或“much more”来强调数量。建议:根据想表达的意思使用“many more”表示数量更多,或“much more beautiful”表示质量更高。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I don't like any of the sports.

I don't like any sports.

原句问题:短语“any of the sports”通常用于特定一组运动(例如“any of the sports we played”);在一般陈述中更自然说“I don't like any sports”或“I don't like sports”。建议:若泛指运动,使用“I don't like sports”或“I don't like any sports”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BoringTedious
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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