Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., “they create memories” → “they create memories” and “a places” → “places”). Avoid redundancy about posting and memories.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy looking out of the window when I travel. For example, I often take photos and short videos and post them on Instagram because they create lasting memories of the places I visit.

Gợi ý: Make the answer shorter and correct verb forms. Use linking words to order details (first, then) and be specific about frequency or purpose. Avoid repeating “keep” and simplify phrases like “album book.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph scenery from the car. I usually save the pictures on my phone and occasionally print my favourites to put in a photo album so I can share them with friends and remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference or say you like both but explain reasons distinctly. Use linking words (however, also) and correct sentence structure. Avoid awkward phrasing like “in so is in the sea.” Provide one specific activity for each place and a brief reason.

Ví dụ: I like both the mountains and the sea because they offer different benefits. For instance, I go to the sea to swim and hang out with friends, while I prefer the mountains when I want peace and enjoy hiking.

× Yes, I love to look at the window, especially taking photos and videos and posting it in my story or Instagram because for me they created a memories as a places that I saw outside.

✓ Yes, I love looking out of the window, especially taking photos and videos and posting them in my Story or on Instagram because for me they create memories of the places I see outside.

Pronoun errors: 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'photos and videos'. Verb tense/agreement: 'created' should be present 'create' to match habitual action. Article and noun agreement: 'a memories' is incorrect; use 'memories' (plural) without 'a'. Prepositions and phrasing: 'look at the window' -> 'looking out of the window'; 'in my story or Instagram' -> 'in my Story or on Instagram'; 'as a places that I saw outside' -> 'of the places I see outside'. Suggestions: match pronouns to number, use present simple for habitual actions, correct articles, and use appropriate prepositions.

× Yes, I do take photos and videos of the scenery I see and I keep it in my phone or sometimes I printed it and put it in my album book and keep it there to remember as part of my journey and share it with some of my friends.

✓ Yes, I do take photos and videos of the scenery I see and I keep them on my phone, or sometimes I print them and put them in my photo album to keep as a reminder of my journey and share them with some of my friends.

Pronoun number: 'it' should be 'them' for plural 'photos and videos' (Incorrect use of pronouns). Verb form/tense: 'printed' should be present simple 'print' for habitual action; use 'do take' is acceptable for emphasis. Preposition and noun choice: 'in my phone' -> 'on my phone'; 'album book' -> 'photo album'; 'to remember as part of my journey' -> 'to keep as a reminder of my journey'. Suggestions: ensure pronouns match plurality, use present simple for routines, correct prepositions, and choose natural collocations.

× I prefer both because they are both beautiful and relaxing and in the mountains I can find my peace in so is in the sea.

✓ I prefer both because they are beautiful and relaxing; in the mountains I can find my peace, and so can I in the sea.

Awkward structure and tense/pronoun placement: 'in the mountains I can find my peace in so is in the sea' is ungrammatical. Correct conjunction and subject placement: use 'and so can I in the sea' or 'and I can also find peace in the sea'. Suggestions: keep parallel structure when comparing two places and place auxiliary/modal verbs correctly for inversion ('so can I').

× I often go to the sea with my friends to swim or hang out and so is the mountains to go on a hike.

✓ I often go to the sea with my friends to swim or hang out, and I also go to the mountains to hike.

Incorrect structure and verb form: 'so is the mountains to go on a hike' is ungrammatical. Use parallel verbs for parallel activities: 'go to the mountains to hike'. Article and number: 'the mountains' is fine but needs correct subject and verb. Suggestions: maintain parallel sentence structure and use the infinitive 'to hike' rather than 'to go on a hike' after a repeated verb for conciseness.