Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home. It looks so great but it may affect my my view in my home.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to take many tall buildings photo in my daily life I prefer the tall buildings because it looks very wonderful and I also like to reach the top of tall buildings so that I can see the whole view.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
I really want to go to the one hundred one building in Taipei Taipei. It's one of the most tallest buildings in Taiwan. I can reach the top to look the whole view.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Actually I prefer to live in in low buildings because I think there are crowd in the tall buildings. I enjoy the low people's building so that it is more convenient for them.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意语法与重复。可以用一句主题句直接回答,然后给一两句具体细节或感受,并用连接词衔接。避免重复单词(例如“my my”)并注意时态与单复数。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. They look impressive, but unfortunately they sometimes block the view from my windows, so I miss seeing the distant hills.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答过长且结构混乱,应分成清晰句子并使用连接词。注意名词复数和冠词(a photo/ photos),并给出具体例子或频率来丰富内容。尽量控制在3-4句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of tall buildings, especially when I travel. I like their shapes and reflections, and sometimes I climb to an observation deck so I can capture the whole cityscape.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更准确自然,避免重复词汇(两次“Taipei”)和语法错误(most tallest)。先直接说出想去的建筑,然后说明原因并补充细节或个人感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taiwan. It is one of the tallest skyscrapers in the country, and I want to go up to the observation deck to enjoy panoramic views of Taipei.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法和表达不清晰。先直接回答喜好,然后给出两个清晰理由,用连接词衔接。注意用词(crowded, low-rise buildings)和句子通顺。避免含糊的短语如“low people's building”。
Ví dụ: Actually I prefer living in a low-rise building because tall blocks tend to be crowded and noisy. Also, low-rise homes are usually easier to access and feel more community-oriented.
× Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home. It looks so great but it may affect my my view in my home.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home. They look great, but they may affect my view at home.
句中“it looks so great”与主语“tall buildings”(复数)不一致,应该用复数代词/动词(they look)。另外“my my”是重复,需删除一个“my”;“in my home”更自然的表达是“at home”。建议注意主语与谓语在单复数上的一致性,避免重复词,并使用常见搭配(at home)。
× Yes, I like to take many tall buildings photo in my daily life I prefer the tall buildings because it looks very wonderful and I also like to reach the top of tall buildings so that I can see the whole view.
✓ Yes, I like to take many photos of tall buildings in my daily life. I prefer tall buildings because they look wonderful, and I also like to reach the top of tall buildings so that I can see the whole view.
句中“take many tall buildings photo”词序和名词形式错误,应为“take many photos of tall buildings”(名词photo复数并用of短语)。“it looks very wonderful”主语应与复数“tall buildings”一致,用“they look wonderful”。“reach the top of tall buildings”语法可接受但与前句分隔需要句号。建议学习photo的可数形式和of短语结构,注意主谓一致。
× I really want to go to the one hundred one building in Taipei Taipei. It's one of the most tallest buildings in Taiwan. I can reach the top to look the whole view.
✓ I really want to go to the One Hundred and One Building in Taipei. It's one of the tallest buildings in Taiwan. I can reach the top to see the whole view.
“most tallest”是冗余错误,比较级与最高级不能同时使用,正确为“one of the tallest”。“look the whole view”搭配错误,应为“see the whole view”。另外“Taipei Taipei”重复,去掉一个。建议注意比较级/最高级用法及动词搭配(see 与 view)。
× Actually I prefer to live in in low buildings because I think there are crowd in the tall buildings. I enjoy the low people's building so that it is more convenient for them.
✓ Actually I prefer to live in low-rise buildings because I think tall buildings are crowded. I prefer low-rise buildings because they are more convenient.
“in in”重复;“low buildings”非标准说法,常说“low-rise buildings”;“there are crowd”中crowd为名词但用法不当,应改为形容词“crowded”或用“there are crowds”表示人多;“I enjoy the low people's building”结构混乱且含义不明,改为“I prefer low-rise buildings because they are more convenient”。建议学习形容词/名词的正确形式,避免重复词,使用常见固定搭配(low-rise, crowded)。