Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha net ve doğal olmalı. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan başlayın, gereksiz tekrar ve anlamsız kelimelerden kaçının. Destekleyici ayrıntılar için iki cümleyi geçmeyin; neden, karşılaştırma veya kısa örnek verin. Bağlaçlar (because, but, however) kullanarak cümleler arası akışı sağlayın ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örneğin 'there are no tall buildings', 'pharmacies').

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Instead, the area has many small markets and pharmacies, so it feels more like a town than a city. I actually prefer it this way because it seems safer and less crowded.

Gợi ý: Cevap kısa ve tutarlı olmalı; tekrarlardan kaçının. Konu cümlesiyle başlayıp bir bağlaçla (however/if) destekleyici neden verin. Daha doğru fiil ve sıfat kullanımına dikkat edin (ör. 'interested in', 'interesting', 'when I really like a building'). Bir veya iki örnekle spesifik olun.

Ví dụ: Not usually; I’m not very interested in buildings. However, if I find the architecture striking or unique, I will take photos — for example, when I visited a historic cathedral last year I took many pictures because of its ornate design.

Gợi ý: Soruya doğrudan yanıt verin (evet veya hayır) ve ardından belirli bir bina veya tür belirtin. Şu anki cevap tekrarlayıcı ve soruyu tam olarak yanıtlamıyor. Kısa bir gerekçe ve bir örnek/özlem ekleyin. Dilbilgisel doğruluğa dikkat edin ('I’m not really interested in', 'if the architecture is impressive').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Guggenheim Museum in Bilbao because I admire its modern architecture. I’ve seen photos and I think experiencing the building in person would be inspiring for photography.

Gợi ý: Soruya uygun olarak yaşam tercihiniz hakkında net bir görüş belirtin ve nedenlerinizi iki kısa cümlede açıklayın. Mevcut cevap binayı fotoğraflama üzerine tekrar ediyor; bunun yerine konuyla ilgili konut, güvenlik, manzara gibi spesifik sebepler verin. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building. I prefer houses because they usually offer more privacy and outdoor space, and I find high-rise living can feel crowded and noisy.

× No, there are no Toby things near my home, but I have lots of markets, pharmacy and as my country is not really developed, there are not really tall buildings.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home; but there are many markets and pharmacies, and since my country is not very developed, there aren't really any tall buildings.

The student used incorrect adjective 'Toby' (likely intended 'tall') and singular 'pharmacy' where plural 'pharmacies' is needed with 'lots of'. Use of 'as' to mean 'because' is awkward; 'since' or 'because' is better. Also add 'any' with negative 'aren't' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: replace wrong adjective with correct one, make nouns agree in number, and choose a clearer connector.

× So it can be good because it's not dangerous.

✓ So it can be good because it is not dangerous.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity keep 'it is'. No major grammatical error beyond style. Suggestion: use 'it is' in formal responses.

× No, I think I'm not really interested in buildings, but I take photos when I really love that building.

✓ No, I am not really interested in buildings, but I take photos when I really like a building.

'I'm not really interested' is fine but consistent tense/formality prefers 'I am'. 'Love that building' is unnatural; use 'like a building' or 'really like a particular building'. Suggestion: use 'like' for preference and 'a/that' consistently.

× But without that situation I don't really take photos of buildings because I don't think the buildings are in interesting.

✓ But otherwise I don't usually take photos of buildings because I don't think they are interesting.

Phrase 'without that situation' is awkward; use 'otherwise'. 'don't really take photos' -> 'don't usually take photos' is more natural. 'the buildings are in interesting' has incorrect preposition and article; should be 'they are interesting'. Suggestion: use appropriate adverbs ('usually'), correct pronoun 'they', and remove wrong preposition.

× No, I don't take the photos of buildings because I don't really interested in buildings.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I'm not really interested in them.

Missing auxiliary 'be' in 'I don't really interested' — correct form is 'I'm not really interested'. Also 'the photos of buildings' is awkward; use 'photos of buildings'. Pronoun 'them' refers back to 'buildings'. Suggestion: use correct adjective pattern 'be + interested in' and proper pronoun.

× But I take photos when I really affected the building that the architecture is really good.

✓ But I take photos when a building's architecture really affects me or is really good.

Verb 'affected' is used incorrectly; feelings 'affect me' is correct but needs subject. Original word order and 'that the architecture is really good' is awkward. Suggestion: rephrase to 'when a building's architecture affects me' or 'when a building has really good architecture'.

× But without that situation I don't really take because it's not interesting.

✓ But otherwise I don't take photos because it's not interesting.

Sentence lacks direct object after 'take' (take what?). Needs 'photos'. 'Without that situation' is awkward; 'otherwise' is clearer. Suggestion: include the object and use natural linking words.

× No, I don't take the photos of buildings because I don't really interested in buildings.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I'm not really interested in them.

See earlier identical error: missing 'be' verb in 'interested', unnecessary 'the' before 'photos', and pronoun 'them' needed. Suggestion: use 'I'm not interested in them'.

× But I take photos when I really affected the building that the architecture is really good.

✓ But I take photos when a building's architecture really impresses me or is very good.

Repeated misuse of 'affected' to describe impression; better verbs are 'impresses' or 'moves'. Also restructure phrase to 'a building's architecture'. Suggestion: use verbs that describe emotional response correctly and possessive noun forms.

× But without that situation I don't really take because it's not interesting.

✓ But otherwise I don't take photos because they are not interesting.

Again missing object after 'take' and unclear reference for 'it'. Replace with 'photos' and plural pronoun 'they' for buildings. Suggestion: always include the object and ensure pronoun agreement.