Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct common errors: say "there aren't any huge buildings" or "there are no tall buildings", and use singular/plural correctly ("two stadiums"). Avoid fillers like "I know, let me see" and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home, but there are two large stadiums nearby. For example, on weekends they host big matches, so the area becomes very crowded and lively.

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct and clearer. Give a direct topic sentence, then one reason and a specific example. Fix verb patterns ("good at taking pictures") and awkward phrases (remove unclear place names or explain them). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really — I'm not very good at taking photos. However, I do take some pictures when I travel to keep memories; for instance, I always photograph the streets and markets because they remind me of that trip later.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar ("one of the most spectacular buildings", "I would love to visit it on my day off"). Avoid vague phrases like "with like some people"; instead mention who you would go with.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is one of the tallest and most spectacular buildings in the world. I would visit it on my day off to enjoy the observation deck and take photos with friends.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and one specific detail. Fix repetition and grammar ("on the highest floor", "the view would be fascinating"). Remove unclear sentences like "They haven't had that experience" and replace with personal experience or plans.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, ideally on the top floor, because the view would be spectacular. For example, I imagine enjoying sunsets over the city from a large balcony every evening.

× There is no any huge buildings in my hometown or nearby my home, but there is 2 stadiums.

✓ There are no huge buildings in my hometown or near my home, but there are two stadiums.

Errors: incorrect use of 'no any' and wrong article/number agreement. 'No' and 'any' should not be used together in affirmative negative context; use 'no' alone or 'any' in questions/negative with auxiliary. 'There is' should match plural noun 'buildings' so use 'There are'. Use 'near' instead of 'nearby' when followed by 'my home'. Spell out numbers under ten: 'two'. Suggestion: use 'There are no huge buildings near my home, but there are two stadiums.'

× It's quite massive, especially on the weekend because sometimes they do have a big matches so over there it's gonna be crazy crowd.

✓ They're quite massive, especially on weekends, because sometimes they have big matches, so there is a huge crowd there.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and count noun forms. 'Stadiums' is plural so refer with 'they' and plural adjective/verb: 'they are' -> 'they're' and 'they have' (not 'do have' for emphasis is possible but unnecessary). 'A big matches' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'big matches' or 'a big match'. 'Gonna' is informal; use 'there is' or 'there will be' and 'crowd' needs determiner: 'a huge crowd'. Use plural 'on weekends' for habitual events. Suggestion: keep verbs matching plural subjects and correct noun forms.

× In all honesty, I'm not really good taking pictures or photos, especially in my hometown Bawana go overseas or when I travel.

✓ In all honesty, I'm not really good at taking pictures, especially in my hometown of Bawana or when I go overseas and travel.

Errors: preposition 'good at' is required after 'good'. Missing preposition 'of' for place name: 'hometown of Bawana'. Word order and missing conjunctions: 'go overseas or when I travel' is ungrammatical; use 'when I go overseas and travel' or 'when I travel overseas'. Suggestion: use 'good at taking pictures' and correct prepositions and conjunctions.

× I take some pictures because I keep it as a beautiful memory and make me feel really joyful and grateful for that moment I had.

✓ I take some pictures because I keep them as beautiful memories and they make me feel really joyful and grateful for the moments I had.

Errors: pronoun agreement and number. 'Pictures' is plural so use 'them' not 'it'. 'A beautiful memory' should match plural or singular consistently; better 'beautiful memories' for multiple pictures. 'Make me' needs subject 'they'. Also 'moment I had' should be plural 'moments I had' if referring to multiple pictures. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and include proper subjects for verbs.

× There is a building in Dubai, it's quite massive and one of the most spectacular building.

✓ There is a building in Dubai; it's quite massive and one of the most spectacular buildings.

Errors: article and noun number agreement. 'One of the most spectacular' must be followed by plural noun 'buildings'. Use semicolon or conjunction to join sentences. Suggestion: use 'one of the most spectacular buildings'.

× I would love to go there when I go off day, especially on the weekend because there is a lot of people will be there and they would love to discover that place with like some people.

✓ I would love to go there on my days off, especially on a weekend, because a lot of people will be there and they would love to explore the place with others.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'go off day' should be 'days off' or 'on my day off'. 'There is a lot of people will be there' mixes present 'there is' with future 'will be' and count noun agreement; use 'a lot of people will be there'. 'Discover that place with like some people' is awkward; use 'explore the place with others'. Suggestion: use correct time expressions ('on my days off') and keep tense consistent within clauses.

× I would say yeah, I absolutely love it. Especially it's gonna be like in the in the highest and the highest floor because the view is gonna be remarkably fascinating and really, really impeccable.

✓ I would say yes, I absolutely would love that, especially on the highest floor because the view would be remarkably fascinating and really impressive.

Errors: informal 'yeah' -> 'yes'; awkward modal usage and future informal 'gonna' should be 'would' for hypothetical preference. Redundant 'in the in the highest and the highest floor' should be 'on the highest floor'. 'Impeccable' is odd for view; 'impressive' fits better. Suggestion: use appropriate modal verbs for hypothetical situations ('would') and formal vocabulary.

× And they haven't that experience. They haven't had that experience.

✓ I haven't had that experience.

Errors: incorrect subject pronoun 'they' used instead of 'I' referring to the speaker. Also incorrect verb order 'haven't that experience' is wrong; use 'haven't had that experience'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns correctly refer to the speaker and use 'have/has + past participle' for present perfect.