Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No), avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct place names and grammar, and give one or two specific details (e.g., types of buildings, how close they are). Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in Astana, the capital of Kazakhstan, and there are many modern high-rise buildings nearby. For example, there are glass office towers and apartment blocks within a ten-minute walk from my home, which makes the area feel very urban.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and a brief reason. Remove repetitions and grammar errors. Use one linking phrase (e.g., 'but' or 'however') and provide a specific example of when or what you photograph. Keep it natural and within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Sometimes. I'm not a professional photographer, but I like taking pictures of especially interesting buildings. For example, I often photograph ornate facades and skyline views when I visit the city centre because they look very picturesque.

Gợi ý: Use a clear topic sentence naming the building correctly and explain briefly why with specific details. Avoid vague or repeated phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'because of its' and give one concrete historical or architectural reason.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the Bayterek Tower because it is one of Kazakhstan's most iconic landmarks. I am interested in its history and unique design, and I would like to see the observation platform to get panoramic views of the city.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clear, specific reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and awkward grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and provide two concise reasons (e.g., lack of garden, noise, feeling of isolation). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I prefer having a garden and more outdoor space. Also, high-rise flats can feel noisy and impersonal, so I prefer a low-rise house that feels more homely.

× Obviously yes, because now I'm living in the capital of the Kazakhstan, uh arsenal, so Arsenal has a lot of uh unique tall high rise buildings that makes sense in the capital.

✓ Obviously yes, because now I'm living in the capital of Kazakhstan, in Arsenal, and Arsenal has a lot of unique tall high-rise buildings that make sense in the capital.

Used 'the' before 'Kazakhstan' incorrectly; country names usually do not take the definite article. 'the Kazakhstan' is wrong. Also corrected phrasing 'uh arsenal' to 'in Arsenal' for preposition use and removed redundant words. 'high-rise' is a compound adjective and should be hyphenated; 'buildings that makes' has a subject-verb agreement error (plural subject 'buildings' needs 'make'), which was fixed by rephrasing to avoid the problematic clause.

× So umm my close proximity.

✓ So I live in close proximity to many of them.

Original fragment is incomplete and lacks a verb and clear subject. Corrected to a full sentence with subject and verb and added 'to many of them' to clarify what is in close proximity. This addresses sentence structure and missing verb issues.

× Yeah, I'm usually because I'm not not a big fan of photo because I I have a a ability to to take a photo because I'm not professional, but I'm trying to do my best and buildings is really incredible and they're really picturesque.

✓ Yes, I usually do, although I'm not a big fan of photography because I don't have the ability to take professional photos; I'm not a professional, but I try my best, and buildings are really incredible and very picturesque.

Multiple problems: 'I'm usually' is incomplete—added 'do' to form 'I usually do' to answer the question. 'not not' was a double negative and removed. 'a ability' should be 'the ability' or 'the ability' -> changed to 'the ability' and rephrased to 'I don't have the ability to take professional photos' to fix article and noun issues. 'buildings is' is subject-verb agreement error (plural subject needs 'are'), fixed. Tense kept present simple to match habitual action.

× I want to visit the Bajirao because this bitterrock is the most the one of the most vital buildings in in Kazakhstan and have some unique history, contains some unique history.

✓ I want to visit Bajirao because it is one of the most important buildings in Kazakhstan and has a unique history.

Removed 'the' before 'Bajirao' since proper names normally do not need 'the' unless part of the name. 'The most the one of the most' is redundant; simplified to 'one of the most important.' Fixed subject-verb agreement: 'have' changed to 'has' for singular subject 'it.' Also removed duplicate phrase 'contains some unique history' and replaced with 'has a unique history.'

× So this is the reason why I'm wanting this.

✓ So this is the reason why I want to visit it.

'I'm wanting' is an unusual present continuous for desire; use simple present 'I want' to express intention. Replaced vague 'this' with 'to visit it' to clarify the object. This fixes verb aspect misuse.

× No, I'm not. I'm not interested in living in a tall building tall beatings because of due to the fact that I don't like the I don't like tall buildings because they look like own house and then not don't have some I will.

✓ No, I'm not. I'm not interested in living in a tall building because I don't like tall buildings; they don't feel like a home to me and I wouldn't want that.

Original had repeated negatives and nonsense phrases. Removed 'tall beatings' (mispronunciation) and 'because of due to the fact that' (redundant). Fixed pronoun usage: 'they look like own house' is incorrect—changed to 'they don't feel like a home to me.' Replaced 'I will' and double negatives with 'I wouldn't want that' to express preference. Overall corrected sentence structure and pronoun reference.