Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 질문에 직접 답하고 있지만, 문법과 문장 구조가 어색하고 반복이 있습니다. 구체적인 설명(예: 몇 층짜리 건물, 유명한 랜드마크)을 추가하고 연결어를 사용하여 문장을 자연스럽게 이어보세요. 또한 발음이나 조사 사용(‘in Sotugo’ → ‘in Sotugo’)과 같은 작은 오류를 고치면 더 명확해집니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. I live in Sotugo, which is close to Gangnam in Seoul, so the area is very crowded and noisy because of the numerous office towers and shopping complexes.

Gợi ý: 답변이 직접적이지만 어휘 선택과 문장 흐름이 부자연스럽습니다(예: 'PO building photos' 의미 불분명). 사진을 찍지 않는 이유와 대체 활동(산에서 사진을 찍는 것)을 명확하게 연결하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하세요. 연결어(‘however’, ‘instead’)를 사용하면 더 논리적입니다.

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely take photos of buildings; instead, I prefer photographing nature. For example, I often go to Changi Mountain near my house to capture landscapes and scenic views.

Gợi ý: 대답은 이해되지만 문법(예: 'don't have any interesting' → 'I'm not interested')과 시제/수일치 오류가 있습니다. 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고, 한두 문장으로 깔끔히 정리하세요. 연결어(‘because’, ‘so’)로 이유와 결과를 자연스럽게 이어주세요.

Ví dụ: Not really. I'm not particularly interested in visiting buildings because I live in Gangnam where there are many of them; instead, I prefer visiting mountains and other natural places for relaxation.

Gợi ý: 의도를 전달하려 했지만 단어 선택과 문법 오류가 많습니다('leave'→'live', 'tall palace in Samsung Go' 불명확). 구체적으로 어떤 건물인지, 왜 살고 싶은지(예: 전망, 편의시설)를 명확하게 말하고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 연결구문('for example', 'because')을 사용해 이유를 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. For example, I'd like to live in a high-rise apartment in Samseong-dong because the views from the upper floors are amazing and there are many convenient facilities nearby.

× I am living in Sotugo in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea, So it is actually near the Gangnam.

✓ I live in Sotugo in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea, so it is actually near Gangnam.

Use simple present for habitual or permanent states (living location). 'Am living' suggests temporary. 'So' should be lowercase. Omit 'the' before 'Gangnam' because it is a proper district name.

× So it is very crowded and always noise, you know.

✓ So it is very crowded and always noisy, you know.

'Noise' is a noun; the adjective 'noisy' should be used to describe the place. Place adverb 'always' is acceptable before 'noisy'.

× I don't have any experience of taking the PO building photos.

✓ I don't really have any experience taking photos of buildings.

Use 'any experience' with gerund 'taking'. 'PO' is unclear and unnecessary; word order 'photos of buildings' is natural. 'Really' fits the conversational tone.

× when I want to take a photo I usually go to the mountain near my house, especially Changi mountain.

✓ When I want to take a photo, I usually go to the mountain near my house, especially Changi Mountain.

Use simple present 'want' for habitual actions; capitalize proper noun 'Changi Mountain' and add comma for clarity.

× Actually I don't have any interesting for the building.

✓ Actually I am not interested in buildings.

'Interesting' is an adjective meaning causing interest; 'interested' describes the person's feeling. Use 'in' with 'interested' and plural 'buildings' for general meaning.

× I live in Gangnam, so there were so many buildings.

✓ I live in Gangnam, so there are so many buildings.

Use present tense 'are' to match 'I live' (current situation). 'Were' implies past. 'So many buildings' is acceptable.

× So actually I usually interested in some mountain or nature.

✓ So actually I am usually interested in mountains or nature.

'Interested' requires the verb 'be' (am). Use plural 'mountains' for general preference and parallel structure with 'nature'.

× To be more specific, I would like to leave the tall palace in Samsung Go.

✓ To be more specific, I would like to live in a tall place in Samseong-dong.

Likely intended 'live' not 'leave'. 'Palace' is incorrect for residential building; use 'place'. 'Samsung Go' seems to refer to 'Samseong-dong' (Gangnam area) — use correct place name and article 'a' for nonspecific place.

× I I heard that of viewpoints is very amazing and fantastic, so someday I want to live there.

✓ I heard that the view from there is amazing and fantastic, so someday I want to live there.

'I I' is a repetition typo. 'That of viewpoints is' is ungrammatical; use 'the view from there' or 'the viewpoints' with correct article. Simplify to convey intended meaning.