Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và cấu trúc chủ-vị), loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và lặp từ, và trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho sự thật, và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: số tầng hoặc loại tòa nhà).

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in an urban area with many multi-storey apartment blocks. For example, several buildings near my home are over ten storeys high and house both shops and residences, so the neighbourhood feels quite dense.

Gợi ý: Giảm lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng, dùng kết cấu rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Sửa lỗi từ vựng/ cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'buildings are not interesting', 'people in action' thay vì 'halted people active').

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't photograph buildings because I find them less interesting. Instead, I prefer capturing natural scenes like sunrises and sunsets, or people in action, because they convey mood and movement.

Gợi ý: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng, tránh lặp và hoàn thiện câu chưa kết thúc. Nên nói tại sao cụ thể bạn muốn đến (ví dụ: tầm nhìn, kiến trúc, tiện ích) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh nói mơ hồ like 'which contains many.'

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the tallest building in Hanoi because I have only seen it on social media. I am curious about its modern architecture and the observation deck, which I believe offers impressive city views.

Gợi ý: Sử dụng cấu trúc mạch lạc: nêu ý chính, nêu lý do cụ thể (tiện ích, an ninh, tiện giao thông), và tránh ngập ngừng. Sửa ngữ pháp ('I'm recently living' → 'I'm currently living').

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer living in a tall apartment building. I currently live in one and appreciate the convenience of shared facilities, better security, and often easier access to public transport.

× Well actually because I living in an urban area which contains many apartments and tall apartments.

✓ Well, actually I live in an urban area which has many apartments and tall buildings.

The verb form 'living' is incorrect here; the simple present 'I live' is needed to state a general fact. Also 'contains' is acceptable but 'has' is more natural; 'tall apartments' is redundant so use 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual or general states and choose concise nouns. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So there are many tall buildings near and surrounding my home.

✓ So there are many tall buildings near and surrounding my home.

No correction needed for plurality; sentence is grammatically correct though 'near and surrounding' is redundant. Suggestion: choose one phrase, e.g., 'near my home' or 'surrounding my home' to be concise. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Umm and it just umm apartment.

✓ Umm, it's just an apartment.

The original lacks proper subject-verb agreement and article usage. Use contraction 'it's' (it is) plus the indefinite article 'an' before a noun starting with a vowel sound. Suggestion: ensure sentences have a subject and verb and include correct articles. Grammar problem type ID:26

× No, actually no, because I find building is not interesting and quite boring.

✓ No, actually no, because I find buildings uninteresting and quite boring.

The noun should be plural 'buildings' when speaking generally. Also 'find ... uninteresting' is more natural than 'find building is not interesting'. Suggestion: use plural for general statements and prefer adjective forms like 'uninteresting'. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Instead I prefer umm taking photos of some scenery such as sunrise or sunsets and halted people active.

✓ Instead, I prefer taking photos of scenery such as sunrises or sunsets and of people who are active.

Use 'prefer taking' is correct but 'scenery' is uncountable; 'sunrises' or 'sunset' should match plurality. 'halted people active' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'people who are active'. Suggestion: reorder to 'people who are active' or 'people in action'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I find it more interesting.

✓ I find them more interesting.

Pronoun should refer to the plural noun 'photos of scenery and people', so 'them' is appropriate. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, definitely I really want to visit uh, the tallest building in Hanoi, despite living in Hanoi, but I have never had a chance to visit that building umm and through social media.

✓ Yes, definitely. I really want to visit the tallest building in Hanoi. Although I live in Hanoi, I have never had a chance to visit that building; I have only seen it through social media.

Run-on sentence and tense clarity issues. Use present simple 'I live' for current residence, present perfect 'I have never had' is correct but separate clauses for clarity. 'And through social media' is fragmentary; clarify with 'I have only seen it through social media.' Suggestion: split long sentences and match tenses appropriately. Grammar problem type ID:5

× It's very fascinating and tall and beautiful, which contains many.

✓ It's very fascinating, tall, and beautiful, and it has many attractions.

Original ends with fragment 'which contains many' without an object. Use a complete phrase like 'it has many attractions' or specify what 'many' refers to. Also list adjectives with commas. Suggestion: avoid fragments and complete the noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I always want to live in a tall building and I'm recently living in a quite tall building.

✓ Yes, I have always wanted to live in a tall building, and I'm currently living in a fairly tall building.

Use present perfect 'have always wanted' to express a continuing desire from past to present. 'Recently living' is awkward; use 'currently living' or 'recently moved into'. Also 'quite tall' is colloquial; 'fairly tall' or 'a fairly tall building' is better. Suggestion: use appropriate tense for ongoing desires and clear adverb placement. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Umm, I love apartment rather than umm like house in the ground because I find it more convenient and umm safe.

✓ Umm, I prefer apartments to houses on the ground because I find them more convenient and safer.

Use plural nouns for general preferences: 'apartments' and 'houses'. Use comparative structure 'prefer A to B'. 'House in the ground' is unnatural; use 'houses on the ground' or 'ground houses'. 'Safe' should be comparative 'safer' when comparing. Also pronoun 'them' should agree with plural antecedent. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and plural forms for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:22