Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp (động từ chia, danh từ số nhiều), tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng liên từ.

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small village with mostly single-storey houses and large gardens, so the skyline is quite low and open.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu logic, ngữ pháp và mạch lạc; cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích lý do, dùng liên từ để nối ý, và tránh mâu thuẫn. Sửa lỗi động từ, trật tự từ và dùng từ phù hợp (enthusiastic → enthusiastic about).

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings. I'm not particularly enthusiastic about architectural photography; I prefer taking pictures of people or landscapes when I travel.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên chính xác về tên địa điểm (ví dụ: Landmark 81), dùng thì đúng, và mở rộng thêm lý do vì sao muốn đến đó để cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, rồi giải thích với liên từ.

Ví dụ: If I have time to visit Ho Chi Minh City, I would like to see Landmark 81. It's the tallest building in Vietnam and I want to photograph its impressive design and the view from the observation deck.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc hơn: trả lời trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp (a tall building, prefer to live), và nêu vài lý do cụ thể (vườn, không gian, yên tĩnh). Dùng liên từ để nối các ý.

Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer living in a small house because it usually has a large garden, more privacy and a quieter environment compared with high-rise apartments.

× No, because I have lived in small village so there are not many building near my home.

✓ No, because I have lived in a small village, so there are not many buildings near my home.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'small village' and needs plural 'buildings'. A comma is required before 'so' connecting two clauses. Suggestion: use 'a small village' for singular countable nouns and pluralize 'building' to 'buildings'.

× It just have small house and lot garden.

✓ It just has a small house and a large garden.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' with singular requires 'has' not 'have'. Countable nouns need articles: 'a small house' and 'a large garden'. 'Lot garden' is incorrect; use 'a large garden' or 'a lot of garden/space'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subjects and include articles for singular countable nouns.

× No, I don't. I'm not. Enthusiastic photo of building so I don't usually take photo when I meet a tour or unique building, but I think I usually.

✓ No, I don't. I'm not enthusiastic about photographing buildings, so I don't usually take photos when I see a notable or unique building.

Several issues: 'I'm not.' is incomplete—should be 'I'm not enthusiastic'. 'Enthusiastic photo of building' misuses nouns and prepositions; use 'enthusiastic about photographing buildings'. 'take photo' should be plural 'take photos'; 'meet a tour' is incorrect—use 'see a notable or unique building'. Remove redundant 'but I think I usually'. Suggestion: use correct collocations like 'enthusiastic about' and pluralize 'photo' when general.

× I think maybe if I have time to travel to Ho Chi Minh City, I want to see and take photo 81 landmark.

✓ I think maybe if I have time to travel to Ho Chi Minh City, I would like to see and take photos of the Bui Vien Street landmark.

Conditional phrasing: use 'would like' for polite future desire after 'if I have time'. 'take photo 81 landmark' is unclear and ungrammatical; include 'photos of' plus correct landmark name or 'a famous landmark'. Also pluralize 'photos'. Suggestion: use 'would like to' and 'take photos of [landmark]'.

× Not really, I'm not interested in tall building, I prefer live in small house because it's have a lot garden around and more.

✓ Not really. I'm not interested in tall buildings; I prefer to live in a small house because it has a large garden around it and more space.

Use plural 'tall buildings'. 'prefer live' should be 'prefer to live'. 'it's have' is wrong—use 'it has'. 'a lot garden' is incorrect; use 'a large garden' or 'a lot of garden space'. 'and more' is vague—use 'and more space' or omit. Suggestion: ensure correct verb forms after 'prefer', subject-verb agreement, plural forms, and clearer vocabulary.