Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., use singular/plural correctly, correct word order). Use linking words like "because" or "so" if you add reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, most of which are about six or seven storeys high. Because I live in a busy city area in India, developers tend to build up to that height rather than very tall skyscrapers.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear present tense statement, then give a specific reason. Avoid informal fillers (e.g., "Nope") and unclear phrasing. Use linking words like "because" to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings. I live very close to them, and I don't find them interesting enough to photograph because the area is noisy and crowded.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer naming the building, then explain why you want to visit with one or two specific reasons. Be careful with sentence structure and choose one clear example rather than mixing several unclear names.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing views from the observation deck. I am interested in modern architecture and skyscraper design, so it would be fascinating to see it in person.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear, concise statement of your preference. Then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "because of". Avoid confusing conditions and improve grammar (e.g., "two or three floors" -> "two or three rooms" or clarify meaning).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers opportunities to meet different people and experience diverse perspectives. If I could choose, I would prefer an apartment that spans two or three rooms so I have enough space and privacy.

× Yes, near my home there is a tall building and the tall buildings have an floor of like 6 to 7th floor.

✓ Yes, near my home there is a tall building, and the tall buildings have around six to seven floors.

Incorrect use of 'there is' with plural 'buildings' and wrong article 'an' before 'floor'. Use 'there is' for singular and 'there are' for plural; here sentence refers to both singular and plural parts so structure split is clearer. Also use 'floors' (plural) and write numbers in words or digits consistently and without ordinal 'th' when indicating count. Suggestion: say 'there are tall buildings that have around six to seven floors.'

× As I live in in city in India so there is an maximum maximum height of an building and floor of the building is 6th to 7th.

✓ As I live in a city in India, there is a maximum height for buildings, and the usual number of floors is six to seven.

Repeated word 'in', wrong article 'an' before 'building', and awkward phrase 'maximum maximum height'. Use 'a city' (indefinite article) and 'a building' if singular. Also '6th to 7th' is incorrect for floor count; use 'six to seven' or 'sixth to seventh' only when referring to specific floor positions. Suggest simplifying to 'the usual number of floors is six to seven.'

× Nope, I didn't take photos of the buildings as it is nearby my house so I didn't like that much buildings as by the buildings the noise is coming so loud.

✓ No, I didn't take photos of the buildings because they are near my house and I don't like those buildings very much; also the noise from them is very loud.

Mix of past and present tense: 'didn't take' (past) vs 'it is nearby' (present). Maintain consistent tense; since talking about past action, use past or general present consistently. Also incorrect pronouns: use 'they' for 'buildings' (plural) and 'those buildings' instead of 'that much buildings'. 'Noise is coming so loud' is unnatural; use 'the noise from them is very loud.'

× Yes, there is an building that I would like to visit is like Norton Building but an hotel like Burj Khalifa and I like that too.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit, like the Norton Building, and also a hotel such as the Burj Khalifa, which I like.

Incorrect article 'an' before 'building' and 'hotel' (use 'a' before consonant sounds). Sentence structure is awkward and contains repetition. Use definite article 'the' for specific named buildings (the Norton Building, the Burj Khalifa) and restructure the sentence for clarity: 'there is a building I would like to visit' and 'also a hotel such as...'.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building if the if two or three floors is in my control.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building if two or three floors are under my control.

Redundant 'if the if' and subject-verb agreement: 'two or three floors is' should be 'are' because the subject is plural. 'In my control' is unnatural; use 'under my control' or 'available to me.' Use modal/conditional structure correctly: 'if two or three floors are available to me.'

× So I like to live in a tall building as in tall buildings I can interact with the new peoples and new mindsets of the people.

✓ I would like to live in a tall building because in tall buildings I can meet new people and learn about their different mindsets.

'Peoples' is incorrect—use 'people' for plural. 'New mindsets of the people' is wordy; simplify to 'different mindsets' or 'their mindsets.' Use 'would like' for polite desire and 'meet' or 'interact with' paired with 'people.' Also avoid repeating 'people.'