Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Not really. My home is far away from the busy streets and quiet. We live in our own house and our neighborhood is not tall at all.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Oh, not really. In my eyes a building is similar to each other and I don't think it's a good way to. Taking the moment.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Uh oh, not really. I think many buildings are look quite similar and I don't. Have the desire to visit them. I prefer going to. Natural habitat.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

Not really. Living in a tall building means a crowded of people. It is hard to live in a quiet and relaxing environment.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较直接但有语法和表达不自然的问题。建议:1) 开头直接给出简短明确的主题句;2) 修正语法错误并合并句子以更自然流畅;3) 使用连接词扩大细节(例如说明距离市中心的远近或周边环境的特点)。示例句子应控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: Not really. I live in a detached house far from the city center, so there are no tall buildings nearby. The area is quiet and mostly made up of low-rise homes, which makes it peaceful to live there.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答含义模糊且有语法和逻辑问题。建议:1) 先给出直接的肯定或否定;2) 用清晰的原因支持观点并举一两个具体例子;3) 避免不完整句子,使用连接词如 'because', 'so' 来衔接原因与结论。

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings because I find many of them look quite similar. Instead, I prefer taking pictures of landscapes or people, which I find more interesting and memorable.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 表达不流畅且句子碎片化。建议:1) 用一两句清楚表明是否想参观某座建筑;2) 提供具体偏好并给出原因或例子(比如喜欢博物馆、古迹或自然景观);3) 修正语法错误并用连接词让句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't have a particular building I want to visit because many modern buildings seem quite similar to me. I prefer visiting natural places like national parks or botanical gardens, where I can relax and enjoy the scenery.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 观点明确但表达有语法错误和用词不当。建议:1) 用清晰的主题句说明立场;2) 用具体原因和一个小细节支持(例如噪音、电梯问题、较少绿地);3) 用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 来增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Not really. I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because they tend to be crowded and noisy. I prefer a quieter house with a garden where I can relax and have more privacy.

Ngữ pháp

'27: Subject-verb agreement errors'

× We live in our own house and our neighborhood is not tall at all.

✓ We live in our own house and our neighborhood is not very dense at all.

句子中“neighborhood is not tall”使用了不合适的形容词“tall”来描述社区。社区通常用“dense”“crowded”或“spacious”等词,而不是“tall”。这不是主谓一致问题本身,但更准确地属于词汇搭配错误;为符合题目要求,归入主谓一致类进行修正并用更自然的表达。建议用“not very dense”或“not crowded”来表达社区不拥挤。

'6: Present tense issue'

× In my eyes a building is similar to each other and I don't think it's a good way to.

✓ In my eyes, buildings are similar to each other and I don't think it's a good way to capture them.

原句时态和数不一致:主语应为复数“buildings”以配合“each other”,并且不完整的短语“a good way to.”缺少动词。已改为现在时复数形式并补全动词“to capture them(拍摄它们)”。建议注意主语与代词/短语的一致性,并完整表达动词不定式。

'27: Subject-verb agreement errors'

× I think many buildings are look quite similar and I don't.

✓ I think many buildings look quite similar and I don't.

原句中“are look”出现主谓重复(be + 动词原形)导致语法错误。正确表达应直接用动词“look”或使用进行时“are looking”。在此句语境下用一般现在时“look”更自然。建议避免在非进行时态中使用多余的助动词。

'26: Sentence structure errors'

× Have the desire to visit them.

✓ I don't have the desire to visit them.

这是不完整句(片段),缺少主语和谓语的完整结构。将其补成完整句“I don't have the desire to visit them.”使其逻辑连贯并与上句呼应。建议说话时确保每个句子都有主语和谓语,避免句子碎片。

'26: Sentence structure errors'

× I prefer going to. Natural habitat.

✓ I prefer going to natural habitats.

原句被错误地拆成两部分,且“going to”后缺少宾语;“Natural habitat”需复数且不应单独成句。已合并为完整句并用复数以表示泛指。建议保持句子连贯,确保动词后的介词短语有完整宾语。

'1: Singular and plural issue'

× Living in a tall building means a crowded of people.

✓ Living in a tall building means a crowd of people.

原句“a crowded of people”词形错误:名词搭配应为“a crowd of people”或形容词用法为“crowded with people”。这里应使用名词“crowd”而不是形容词“crowded”。建议记住常见搭配:a crowd of ... 或 crowded with ... 来表达“拥挤”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Crowded— Packed
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Hard— Firm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Quiet— Silent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
Tall— In height; Demanding
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