Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับประโยคให้ถูกไวยากรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น ตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วเสริมรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ชื่อหรือจำนวนชั้นของตึก และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ลื่นไหล ตัวอย่างความผิดที่ควรแก้: ใส่ article (a/an/the), ไม่ต้องซ้ำคำ เช่น “in there”, ระบุรายละเอียดจริงแทนคำทั่วไปอย่าง “good environment”.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a tall building near my home. It is a condominium with about 15 floors and many families live there. The building has a small gym and a swimming pool on the rooftop, and the area around it has many trees and quiet streets, which makes the environment pleasant.

Gợi ý: ใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้องและทำให้เหตุผลชัดเจน ตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วเสริมด้วยเหตุผลและตัวอย่างสั้นๆ ใช้ linking words เช่น "but" หรือ "however" อย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้วลีซ้ำซ้อน เช่น "take photo of the building" หลายครั้ง

Ví dụ: I don't usually take photos of buildings because I rarely find them interesting. However, if I see an especially beautiful or unusual building while travelling, I would probably take a photo to remember it.

Gợi ý: ตอบให้ชัดเจนและมีโครงสร้าง ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วเสริมด้วยเหตุผลและตัวอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจง แก้การซ้ำคำและข้อผิดพลาดไวยากรณ์ ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น "because", "but", "maybe" ให้เหมาะสม และเสนออาคารตัวอย่างหรือประเภทอาคารที่อยากไปเยือน

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific building in mind right now because I haven't researched many famous buildings. However, I would like to visit modern architectural landmarks like the Sydney Opera House or a famous skyscraper in the future because I enjoy unique design and city views.

Gợi ý: อธิบายเหตุผลให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ แก้คำที่ไม่เข้าใจหรือแปลผิด (เช่น "wheel upset" น่าจะหมายถึง "busy traffic" หรือ "wheels below") ใช้รายละเอียดเฉพาะ เช่น ระดับชั้นที่ต้องการ ข้อดีและข้อเสีย และหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคซับซ้อนเกินไป

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy having a view over the city. Living on a higher floor would let me watch the busy streets and car lights at night, and I would also feel more private and peaceful compared to living at ground level.

× Yes, there is tall building near my home.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building near my home.

The noun 'building' is singular and requires the article 'a' before it. Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct. Suggestion: use 'a' with singular countable nouns: 'a tall building'.

× It is a condo where people usually live in there.

✓ It is a condo where people usually live.

The phrase uses both 'where' and the redundant adverb 'there'. Removing 'there' avoids repetition. Suggestion: use either 'where people live' or 'there people live', but prefer 'where people usually live'.

× It has fitness, a swimming pool and fresh air and good environment.

✓ It has a fitness center, a swimming pool, fresh air, and a good environment.

'Fitness' is vague; use 'a fitness center' or 'fitness facilities'. Add articles for countable nouns and commas for clarity. 'Good environment' should have an article 'a' or be rephrased. Suggestion: list items with correct articles and parallel structure.

× I usually didn't take photo of the building because I don't have reason to take a picture of the building.

✓ I usually don't take photos of buildings because I don't have a reason to take pictures of them.

The adverb 'usually' with 'didn't' (simple past) is inconsistent; present simple 'don't' fits habitual actions. Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' for general statements and include 'a reason' and pronoun 'them' to refer back. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and maintain number consistency.

× But I think in the future if I have faced the beautiful building, I might take one.

✓ But I think in the future if I see a beautiful building, I might take one.

'Have faced' is incorrect here; 'see' or 'come across' suits future hypothetical situations. Use 'a beautiful building' (singular countable) and 'take one' (take a photo). Suggestion: use 'if I see' or 'if I come across' for conditional future events.

× I don't have any building that I would like to visit because I don't have the information the information about any building in the entire world, but I hope I just run a course to the one and find beautiful and being my favorite one.

✓ I don't have any building that I would like to visit because I don't have information about any building in the world, but I hope I can travel to one, find it beautiful, and make it my favorite.

Remove duplicate 'the information the information'. Use uncountable 'information' without 'the' when speaking generally. 'Run a course to the one' is incorrect; use 'travel to one'. Use verbs 'find' and 'make' to express discovery and preference, and correct infinitive/gerund forms. Suggestion: simplify and use common collocations like 'travel to', 'find it beautiful', 'make it my favorite'.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to see the wheel upset down there.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to see the wheel up close down there.

'Wheel upset' is meaningless here. Likely intended 'wheel up close' or 'wheel below' — use 'up close' to indicate proximity. Ensure vocabulary matches intended image. Suggestion: use clear expressions like 'see the wheel up close' or 'see the Ferris wheel below'.

× It might be very interesting seeing car all day and being near the sky than the other people.

✓ It might be very interesting to see cars all day and to be nearer the sky than other people.

Use infinitive 'to see' rather than gerund 'seeing' to match structure. 'Car' should be plural 'cars'. 'Being near the sky than the other people' has comparative errors; use 'to be nearer the sky than other people' or 'closer to the sky than other people'. Remove unnecessary 'the'. Suggestion: use parallel infinitives and correct comparatives ('nearer' or 'closer to').