Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with connectors. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms (e.g., "that's", "designing design styles", "can have the convenience"). Use plural/singular correctly and choose precise vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home. For example, some are modern glass towers while others keep traditional architectural details. Because of this variety, the area feels visually interesting and often has convenient shops and transport links.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then explain clearly with one or two specific reasons. Use correct modifiers and simple past/present forms; avoid unclear phrases like "mother style" and repetitions. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings because I like their shapes and details. For example, I use my smartphone to capture ornate facades or unusual roofs so I can remember them and share the pictures with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use one clear reason with a specific example. Replace vague phrases with concrete details (e.g., "traditional architecture or cultural museums"). Use linking words like "because" and avoid grammatical errors such as tense and article misuse.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit historic buildings with traditional architecture because they show local culture. For example, I want to visit an old temple or a colonial-era museum to learn about regional costumes and rituals I have not seen before.

Gợi ý: Give a clear conditional answer and correct grammar. Use one or two specific reasons linked logically (e.g., "if I can afford it, I would because..."). Correct common errors: "depends on finances", "live in", "which has elevators". Keep sentences short and natural.

Ví dụ: I would consider living in a tall building if I could afford it. If I had the budget, I would choose one with good elevators and facilities because it would be convenient and safe.

× Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings that's nearby and it's all have different designing design styles.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings nearby and they all have different design styles.

Original errors: 'that's' is a contraction of 'that is' and does not agree with the plural subject 'buildings'; 'it's all have' mixes singular 'it' with plural verb 'have'; 'designing design styles' is redundant. Correction fixes subject-verb agreement by using the plural pronoun 'they' with 'have', removes the incorrect contraction, and simplifies the phrase to 'design styles'. Suggestion: match plural nouns with plural verbs/pronouns and avoid redundant modifiers.

× For instance, you can see some modern style or even traditional style and those tall buildings can have the convenience.

✓ For instance, you can see some modern or traditional styles, and those tall buildings can be convenient.

Errors: 'some modern style or even traditional style' should use plural 'styles' when referring generally; 'can have the convenience' is awkward and ungrammatical — 'convenient' describes buildings. Correction uses plural 'styles' and adjective 'convenient'. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally and choose appropriate adjective forms rather than 'have' plus abstract noun.

× Yes, I would take some photos of those building which has some mother style or the type that I very like it or even I want to re record that let myself have have a strong memory and I would use my smartphone to capture.

✓ Yes, I would take some photos of those buildings which have a particular style that I really like, or I might record them to keep a strong memory, and I would use my smartphone to capture them.

Multiple errors: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'those'; 'which has' should be 'which have' for plural antecedent; 'mother style' is unclear — likely 'particular style' or 'another style'; 'the type that I very like it' mixes structures and includes redundant 'it'; 're record' should be 'record' and 'let myself have have a strong memory' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Correction fixes plurality, simplifies phrasing, removes redundancy, and uses natural collocations ('keep a strong memory' -> 'to keep a strong memory' or better 'to remember them'). Suggestion: ensure noun/pronoun number agreement and use clear, idiomatic phrases.

× I would like to visit those buildings which have some traditional cultures, this kind of element because visit this kind of places that can let me feel different culture or some traditional costumes that I haven't known before.

✓ I would like to visit buildings that have traditional cultural elements because visiting these places lets me experience different cultures and traditional costumes that I did not know before.

Errors: 'which have some traditional cultures, this kind of element' is awkward and mixes singular/plural; 'visit this kind of places' should be 'visiting these places' (gerund needed after 'because' and correct demonstrative 'these'); 'let me feel different culture' should be 'lets me experience different cultures'; 'haven't known before' should be 'did not know before' for past reference. Correction uses proper prepositions and gerund form, correct demonstratives, and plural nouns. Suggestion: use 'visiting' after 'because', match demonstratives ('these') with plural nouns, and prefer 'experience' for sensing cultures.

× Actually I would say yes, but it is also depends on the the ability of financial.

✓ Actually, I would say yes, but it also depends on my financial ability.

Errors: 'it is also depends' incorrectly combines 'is' with 'depends' — use 'depends' without 'is'; 'the the ability of financial' has word order and article errors; correct phrase is 'my financial ability' or 'my financial situation'. Correction uses proper verb form and natural noun phrase. Suggestion: after 'depends on' follow the noun phrase directly and avoid extra 'is'.

× If I have enough budget or I can afford the price, I would like to leave those buildings in which has some elevators that is very convenient.

✓ If I have enough budget or can afford the price, I would like to live in those buildings which have elevators, because that is very convenient.

Errors: 'I would like to leave those buildings' uses 'leave' instead of 'live' (likely a typo); 'in which has some elevators' mixes constructions — use 'which have' for plural 'buildings'; 'that is very convenient' should refer to the convenience of elevators or living there. Correction fixes the verb to 'live', corrects subject-verb agreement with 'have', and rephrases for clarity. Suggestion: check for typos ('leave' vs 'live') and ensure relative clauses agree in number with their antecedents.