Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

No dear any tall buildings near my home in my hometown is a rural area and they just have some small apartment and and some official buildings in there.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yes, I take a lot of photos of buildings. I found over picturing the structure of a different style of buildings, especially when I travel to different places and both modern and all the styles. And I want to share that to my social media. Yeah.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really want to visit the Sydney Opera House. Its special desire really attract me and I want to closed up to say it.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

It depends actually, if I work it at a big city and living in a tall building is a convenient for my for my job, but when living with my family I want to live in a spa house with more space.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 注意用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题,避免口语中不必要的词(如“dear”)和重复。使用正确的语法和标点,分成一句主题句和一两句补充说明,提供具体细节(例如“how many”或“what types”)。

Ví dụ: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home. I come from a rural area where most structures are low-rise, such as small apartment blocks and a few municipal buildings.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 保持肯定回答,然后用连贯的支持句说明原因和具体情境,注意时态和词汇搭配(如“enjoy photographing”而非“found over picturing”)。避免口语填充词,控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially when I travel. I like capturing different architectural styles, from modern skyscrapers to traditional houses, and I often share my favorite shots on social media.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答,然后具体说明原因,使用正确表达(例如“its unique design attracts me”),并给出想做的具体事(例如“to see it up close or attend a performance”)。避免语法错误和模糊的短语。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd love to visit the Sydney Opera House because its unique design fascinates me. I want to see it up close and maybe attend a concert there to appreciate both the architecture and the acoustics.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 用一两句清晰表达条件式回答(例如“It depends”后接原因),注意语法(例如“convenient for my job”)和词汇选择(“spacious house”而非“spa house”)。给出具体对比细节说明偏好。

Ví dụ: It depends. If I work in a big city, living in a tall building would be convenient for commuting, but if I live with my family I would prefer a spacious house with a garden for more room and privacy.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× No dear any tall buildings near my home in my hometown is a rural area and they just have some small apartment and and some official buildings in there.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. My hometown is a rural area and it only has some small apartments and a few official buildings.

句子结构混乱,缺少主谓一致与连接词。需要分成两句:第一句用否定存在句(There aren't any...);第二句说明原因并用单数主语与动词一致(My hometown is...),并用it作为代词指代hometown,修正名词复数形式和冠词(small apartments, a few official buildings)。

Verb + -ing form

× I found over picturing the structure of a different style of buildings, especially when I travel to different places and both modern and all the styles.

✓ Yes, I take a lot of photos of buildings. I enjoy photographing the structures of different styles, especially when I travel to different places, both modern and traditional.

原句中用词错误(found over picturing)且短语不自然。可用动名词photographing表示喜欢做某事,structures与different styles搭配更自然,最后用both...and...结构时需列举两项(modern and traditional)。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And I want to share that to my social media. Yeah.

✓ And I want to share them on my social media.

中文预置介词用法不同,英语中动词share常与介词on连用(share something on social media),并且指代照片时用them作为代词。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Its special desire really attract me and I want to closed up to say it.

✓ Its special design really attracts me and I want to get close to see it.

原句使用了错误的名词(desire)和动词形式。正确应为special design(独特的设计),动词attract需加第三人称单数s(attracts),短语表示靠近看用get close to see。

Present tense issue

× It depends actually, if I work it at a big city and living in a tall building is a convenient for my for my job, but when living with my family I want to live in a spa house with more space.

✓ It depends. Actually, if I work in a big city and living in a tall building is convenient for my job, I might consider it. But when living with my family, I want to live in a spacious house with more space.

原句时态与介词使用混乱:work后应接介词in(work in a big city);convenient不需要不定冠词a;重复短语(for my)需删除;spa house拼写和用词错误,应为spacious house(宽敞的房子)。此外句子需用条件句和主句分隔以更清晰表达。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Big— Large; Elder; Important; Ambitious
Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
Modern— Present-day; Fashionable
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
Special— Exceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
Tall— In height; Demanding
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