Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答总体明确但表达有些重复与语法错误。建议先给出一个简洁的主题句，然后用一两句补充具体信息并用连接词使句子更流畅。注意冠词和动词形式（例如“The apartment that I live in has 12 floors”，“are around 10 to 15 floors tall”应改为“are around 10 to 15 storeys/tall”）。

Ví dụ: Not really — I live in a residential neighborhood, so most buildings aren’t very tall. For example, the apartment I live in has 12 floors, and nearby blocks are typically around 10 to 15 storeys.

Gợi ý: 内容意思清楚但句子结构和用词不够准确，有重复词汇（“have a have an”）与语法问题（“are look the same to me”）。建议先回答直接，然后用一两个具体原因或情景支持并使用连接词，如“however”或“because”。避免冗长或不必要的信息。

Ví dụ: Not really — I don’t usually photograph buildings in Taizhou because many of them look quite similar. However, if I travel abroad to places like Europe or America, I would take pictures of famous buildings and tourist attractions.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁且有个人观点，但可改进之处是避免口语填充词（如“Umm”），并用更具体的理由来支持喜好（例如观景、历史或氛围）。连贯性可通过连接词加强。

Ví dụ: Yes — I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower someday. Although some people find it overrated, I think it has a romantic atmosphere and offers spectacular views of Paris, so I want to experience that in person.

Gợi ý: 理由明确但表达上有重复（“happen happen”）和小语法错误。建议先给出简短回答，然后用两点支持理由并用连接词（例如“because” 或“also”）。可以加入一点比较或结果，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: No — I wouldn’t want to live in a very tall building because Taiwan is prone to earthquakes, which would make me feel unsafe. Also, maintenance and service fees for high-rise apartments tend to be quite expensive.

× The apartment that I live has 12 floors.

✓ The apartment that I live in has 12 floors.

句子缺少介词“in”。在英语中，表示“我住的公寓”通常用关系从句“that I live in”或“which I live in”。漏掉“in”导致结构不完整。建议记住固定搭配“live in (a place)”。

× The buildings nearby my house also around 10 to 15 floors tall.

✓ The buildings near my house are also about 10 to 15 stories tall.

原句中介词和句子结构错误：应使用“near my house”而不是“nearby my house”。此外需有系动词“are”，并用“about”表示大约，用“stories”更常用于楼层。建议熟悉形容词/副词“near”和“nearby”的用法，注意补完整的系表结构。

× No buildings in Taizhou are look the same to me.

✓ No buildings in Taizhou look the same to me.

原句多余使用了系动词“are”与实义动词“look”同时出现，造成语法错误。正确结构是主语+动词“look”。建议注意不要在主动词前加多余的系动词。

× However, if I have a have an opportunity to go abroad such as Europe or America, I will take photos of the buildings there, especially tourist spot.

✓ However, if I have an opportunity to go abroad to places such as Europe or America, I will take photos of the buildings there, especially tourist spots.

句中有重复“have a have an opportunity”，需删除重复；表示“去某些地方”用“to places such as...”；“tourist spot”作可数名词需用复数“tourist spots”或改为“tourist attractions”。建议检查重复词并注意介词及可数名词复数形式。

× Yes, I would like to visit Eiffel Tower someday.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower someday.

专有建筑物名前通常需要定冠词“the”；“Eiffel Tower”前加“the”。建议记住某些地标前需用定冠词。

× Although people said that it looks boring, I still think it is romantic.

✓ Although people say that it looks boring, I still think it is romantic.

原句时态混用：前半句用过去时“said”但表达一般事实或普遍意见时应使用现在时“say”。保持时态一致更清晰。建议根据语境选择现在时或过去时。

× Umm, I would like to feel the romance in person.

✓ Umm, I would like to experience the romance in person.

“feel the romance”虽然可理解，但用动词“experience”更自然地表达“亲身感受浪漫”。建议在口语中选用更常见搭配。

× No, because Taiwan has earthquakes.

✓ No, because Taiwan has earthquakes.

该句本身语法正确，但与下句搭配需注意时态一致。此处保留原句。

× It would be shaky if earthquake happens happen.

✓ It would be shaky if an earthquake happens.

原句有单复数和重复错误：删除重复的“happen”，并在“earthquake”前加不定冠词“an”。此外“would be shaky”描述假设情形可行。建议注意不要重复动词并正确使用冠词。

× Also the service fee of those tall apartments is expensive.

✓ Also, the service fees for those tall apartment buildings are expensive.

原句中“service fee”可用复数“service fees”或改为“maintenance fees”；“those tall apartments”更自然为“those tall apartment buildings”；动词需与复数主语一致（are）。建议注意名词单复数一致和主谓一致，以及更自然的名词搭配。