Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Meaning is unclear and grammar is incorrect. Give a direct topic sentence answering the question, then one or two clear supporting details. Use simple correct structures (There are/There aren’t, because, for example). Keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. Most houses there are low and spread out, and the area is mostly farmland. For example, the nearest town only has two- or three-storey buildings.

Gợi ý: Good basic idea but grammar and phrasing are incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence (No, I don’t), then give a reason using linking words (because, so) and a specific example. Use correct noun forms (scenery, photos of scenery).

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing scenery. For example, I enjoy taking pictures of rivers, mountains and sunsets when I travel, so buildings are not my main subject.

Gợi ý: The answer identifies a building but has unclear phrasing and grammar. Begin with a direct statement naming the building, then give reasons with linking words and a specific detail about what you would do there. Keep sentences concise and accurate.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in my country. I would like to go to the observation deck to see the city view and perhaps eat at a restaurant there.

Gợi ý: Meaning is partially clear but grammar is poor and the second reason is unfinished. Start with a clear negative or positive statement, give two short reasons linked with because/and, and include a concrete example (e.g. small rooms, safety concerns).

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because apartments there are often small and I prefer more space. Also, I worry about safety during emergencies, for example it could be harder to evacuate from a high floor.

× Knock it on a shimmer isn't go to the first desk if I live in the countryside, therefore my most of house in there is small and large is.

✓ Not at all. I don't live in the city; I live in the countryside, so most houses there are small rather than tall.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear (Grammar problem type 26). Issues include incorrect phrases ('Knock it on a shimmer', 'go to the first desk'), wrong word order, and wrong use of quantifiers. I corrected to a clear, grammatically correct response appropriate to the question and kept present simple tense. Suggestion: use simple, direct clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'most houses there are') and avoid literal translations or idiomatic errors.

× No, I don't. Am a big fan of taking photos about the sceneries are speech. Therefore I don't take photos about buildings.

✓ No, I don't. I am a big fan of taking photos of scenery, so I don't usually photograph buildings.

Original errors include missing subject 'I', incorrect preposition 'about' instead of 'of', and awkward noun phrasing (Grammar problem type 11). Also adjusted tense and word choice for natural English. Suggestion: always include the subject with the verb (I am), use 'photograph' or 'take photos of' + object, and use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun without 'the' in this context.

× That'll be nothing else in Landmark 81. Uh, simple reason go to the first desk is is it the tallest building in my country? Therefore I want to visit there and enjoy the.

✓ I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in my country, so I want to go there and enjoy the view.

Sentence had multiple structure problems (Grammar problem type 26): incorrect modal ('That'll be nothing else'), broken word order, and incomplete clauses. I rewrote to a coherent sentence in present/polite conditional appropriate for liking to visit. Suggestion: express reasons with clear connectors ('because'), use correct subject-verb order ('it is the tallest'), and complete the final clause ('enjoy the view').

× Knock at all because I think most of tall building has small spaces and if you have two both of accident you have to.

✓ Not at all, because I think most tall buildings have small spaces, and if an accident happens you would be in trouble.

Original contains incorrect conjunctions and connectors and subject-verb agreement issues (Grammar problem types 16 and 27). Phrases like 'Knock at all' and 'if you have two both of accident you have to' are ungrammatical. I corrected conjunction use ('Not at all, because... and if...'), fixed plural agreement ('most tall buildings have'), and clarified the conditional ('if an accident happens you would be in trouble'). Suggestion: use standard negation ('Not at all'), ensure subjects and verbs agree in number, and restructure conditional clauses with 'if' + present, then main clause with modal ('would').