Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğal ve akıcı olmalı; gereksiz duraklamalar ve tekrarlar azaltılmalı. Konuya doğrudan başlayın, dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "I'm live" ➜ "I live"). Bir veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin ve bağlaç kullanın (ör. "so", "because") ama kısa tutun.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city. For example, I can see several high-rise apartments from my window every morning, so tall buildings are a normal part of my daily view.

Gợi ý: Cümleleri daha doğru ve tutarlı kurun; tekrar eden ifadeleri kaldırın. Olumsuz yanıt verirken kısa bir ana cümle kurun ve sebepleri net ve tek cümlede verin. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ("a photos" ➜ "photos"; "this the buildings is" ➜ "these buildings are").

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I find tall skyscrapers intimidating. For instance, their height and narrow windows make me feel uneasy when I look at them.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı açık ve doğru bilgiyle verin; karışık ve belirsiz ifadelerden kaçının. Ziyaret etmek istediğiniz binayı adı ve nedenini kısaca açıklayın. Gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerini (uh, umm) kullanmayın ve tekil/çoğul ile yer isimleri ilişkisini düzeltin.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a building I'd like to visit: the Burj Khalifa in Dubai, because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing views from its observation deck.

Gợi ý: Kısa ve direkt bir ana cümle kullanın, ardından sebebi mantıklı ve düzgün bir cümleyle açıklayın. Duygusal gerekçeyi somutlaştırabilirsiniz (ör. güvenlik endişesi, alan eksikliği). Dilbilgisi ve bağlaç kullanımını düzeltin ("so that this building is dangerous for my son" ➜ "because I think it would be dangerous for my son").

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I worry it could be unsafe for my young son. For example, I prefer a ground-floor home with easy access to outdoor play areas and quick exits in emergencies.

× Yes, there are a lot of, uh, tall buildings, uh, near my home because I'm live, uh, a big city.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city.

The error involves incorrect use of the present continuous 'I'm live' instead of the simple present 'I live' and missing preposition 'in'. Use simple present for habitual / general facts (I live). Also include the preposition 'in' with 'a big city'. Remove filler words and extra commas for natural speech. Suggestion: Use 'I live in' for residence, and avoid unnecessary pauses.

× So that. I see the I usually see a tall bull building every day.

✓ I usually see a tall building every day.

The sentence contains fragmented structure and repeated words ('So that. I see the I'). Also 'bull' is a mistaken word. Simplify to a correct subject-verb-object order: 'I usually see a tall building every day.' Suggestion: Remove fragments and repeated words; use correct nouns.

× No, I don't, uh, take a photos, uh, photos of buildings because, uh, I don't like the tall buildings.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I don't like tall buildings.

'Take a photos' is incorrect: 'photos' is plural so do not use 'a'. Also 'the tall buildings' implies specific buildings; general dislike should use zero article 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: Use 'take photos' for plural and omit 'the' for general statements.

× Because this the buildings is very scary for me.

✓ Because these buildings are very scary for me.

Mismatch between subject and verb: 'this the buildings' is incorrect determiner and 'is' does not agree with plural 'buildings'. Use plural demonstrative 'these' and plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: Match demonstratives and verb number to the noun: 'these buildings are'.

× Yes uh there is a building uh, that you would like to visit uh it's uh it's from uh Dubai at Dubai it's uh building kids umm 100 flat.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit. It is in Dubai; it is a building with about 100 flats for families/kids.

Original is very fragmented and unclear. Use clear sentence boundaries and correct prepositions: 'in Dubai' instead of 'at Dubai'. 'Building kids 100 flat' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'building with about 100 flats' or '100-floor building' if intended. Ensure pronoun refers to speaker: 'I would like to visit.' Suggestion: Break into simple sentences, use 'in Dubai', and specify whether '100 flats' or '100-floor' is meant.

× Do you want to live in a tall building?

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a son, so this building is dangerous for my son.

Original student answer was mostly correct but had unnecessary 'that' and awkward 'so that this building is dangerous'. The corrected sentence removes 'that' and fixes word order. No tense issue; primary fix is sentence flow and cohesion. Suggestion: Use clear conjunctions and avoid redundant words: 'so this building would be dangerous for my son.'