Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับปรุงความชัดเจนและความเป็นธรรมชาติของประโยค แก้คำผิดและใช้โครงสร้างที่กระชับกว่า เช่น แทนที่จะพูดว่า 'almost apartment towers' ควรใช้คำว่า 'a few apartment towers' และรวมข้อมูลให้อยู่ในประโยคที่ราบรื่น นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดเฉพาะเช่นความสูงโดยประมาณหรือระยะทางจากบ้านเพื่อเพิ่มเนื้อหา

Ví dụ: Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home. Specifically, I can see two apartment towers and an office block from my balcony, which are about 200 meters away.

Gợi ý: ทำให้ประโยคกระชับและใช้ linking words อย่างเหมาะสม แก้ข้อผิดไวยากรณ์เล็กน้อย (a new place or country) และให้รายละเอียดเฉพาะเกี่ยวกับสไตล์อาคารหรือเทคนิคการถ่าย เพื่อเพิ่มความน่าสนใจ

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. When I visit a new place or country, I often photograph buildings because I enjoy their architecture and the way they fit into the landscape, and the photos help me remember the trip.

Gợi ý: หลีกเลี่ยงการกล่าวซ้ำและเชื่อมประโยคด้วย linking words ให้ชัดเจน อธิบายเพิ่มเติมว่าทำไมถึงอยากขึ้นไปด้านบนหรือถ่ายภาพจากด้านล่าง เช่น เพื่อดูวิว ทิวทัศน์เมืองหรือรายละเอียดสถาปัตยกรรม

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower because it is iconic. I want to go to the top for the panoramic views of Paris, and also take photos from the ground to capture its intricate ironwork.

Gợi ý: แก้โครงสร้างประโยคและข้อผิดไวยากรณ์ (เช่น 'I will do want' → 'I would like to' และ 'a nice views' → 'nice views') และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลกับตัวอย่างให้ราบรื่น ให้รายละเอียดเฉพาะเกี่ยวกับสิ่งอำนวยความสะดวกหรือเหตุผลด้านความปลอดภัย ความสะดวกในการเดินทาง

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually offers nice views and convenient facilities like a swimming pool and gym. For example, living in a condominium in the city makes commuting and daily chores much easier.

× There are almost apartment towers and one office building and I can see them from my balcony.

✓ There are almost no apartment towers and one office building, and I can see them from my balcony.

The original sentence likely intended to say 'almost no apartment towers' meaning few or none; 'almost apartment towers' is incorrect collocation. Also a comma before 'and' improves clarity. Suggestion: use 'almost no' for near-zero quantity or rephrase to 'There are a few apartment towers and one office building' if meaning is few.

× I usually take photos of buildings when I visit new place and country because I like the landscape and architecture and it helps me remember that place very well.

✓ I usually take photos of buildings when I visit new places and countries because I like the landscapes and architecture, and it helps me remember those places very well.

Errors: countable nouns need plural forms ('place'->'places','country'->'countries'); 'landscape' pluralized to 'landscapes' to match plural subjects; 'that place' inconsistent with plural, change to 'those places'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: make nouns plural when speaking generally about visiting multiple places/countries and ensure demonstrative pronoun agrees in number.

× Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower. It's famous and the view from the top looks amazing and I want to take photos of Eiffel Tower from the ground.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower. It's famous and the view from the top looks amazing, and I want to take photos of the Eiffel Tower from the ground.

When referring to a specific landmark, use the definite article 'the' before its name consistently ('the Eiffel Tower'). The second mention omitted 'the'. Suggestion: use 'the' before well-known monuments each time you mention them.

× Yes, I will do want to live in a tall building because it usually has a nice views and good facilities such as swimming pool and gym.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually has nice views and good facilities such as a swimming pool and a gym.

Multiple issues: 'will do want' is incorrect phrase; use 'would like' or 'want to'. 'Has a nice views' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'views'—use 'nice views' or 'a nice view'. Also countable nouns need articles: 'a swimming pool' and 'a gym'. Suggestion: use 'would like' for polite preference, remove conflicting auxiliaries, match articles with singular/plural nouns.

× For example, living in a condominium is more convenient and easier for cities people.

✓ For example, living in a condominium is more convenient and easier for city people.

'Cities people' is incorrect; use 'city people' to mean people who live in cities. Alternatively 'people in cities' is better. 'More convenient and easier' is acceptable but 'easier for city people' is somewhat awkward; consider 'for people who live in cities' or 'for city dwellers'. Suggestion: use correct noun form 'city' as an adjective or rephrase to 'people in cities'.