Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi cấu trúc (ví dụ “People call this is Landmark 81” sai). Có thể thêm một chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn về vị trí hoặc cảm nhận để phong phú câu trả lời. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes. My home is near Landmark 81, the tallest building in Vietnam. It’s a local landmark in Ho Chi Minh City and I can see it from my balcony.

Gợi ý: Giảm tiếng “umm” và sửa ngữ pháp số nhiều/đếm (buildings, take photos). Câu nên ngắn gọn, thêm linking word để mạch lạc (for example, so). Cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về mục đích hoặc cách chụp để tăng điểm nội dung.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually take photos of interesting buildings when I visit them. For example, I often photograph Landmark 81 on weekends to capture its night lights.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng ("this architecture of FA" không chính xác; "Toilet Pagoda" cần giải thích nếu là tên gọi). Tránh liệt kê quá nhanh; nên chọn một công trình chính rồi nêu lý do cụ thể với linking words (because, and). Giữ trong 2-3 câu rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Sydney Opera House because its unique sail-like architecture fascinates me. I’m also interested in visiting the Toilet Pagoda in Vietnam to see its unusual design and cultural significance.

Gợi ý: Câu có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp ("I very enjoy to living", "can't see the whole" mâu thuẫn). Nên nói rõ quan điểm với cấu trúc đúng, giải thích lý do cụ thể (view, facilities, quiet) và dùng linking word (because, so). Loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng và từ sai nghĩa.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers stunning views of the city and usually has good facilities. For example, living high up would be quieter and feel cooler in the evenings.

× People call this is Landmark 81 is a famous building in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ People call this Landmark 81; it is a famous building in Ho Chi Minh City.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'call' with an extra 'is' and duplicates the verb 'is'. Use 'call' + object (Landmark 81) and then a separate clause with 'it is' or combine with a semicolon. Suggestion: 'People call this Landmark 81' or 'This is called Landmark 81.'

× I usually take the photos of building when I see the gorgeous building.

✓ I usually take photos of buildings when I see a gorgeous building.

Pluralization and article use are linked to -ing rule: 'take photos' not 'take the photos' when speaking generally; 'building' should be plural after 'photos' or use an article 'a gorgeous building'. Also remove unnecessary 'the'.

× I take the photo of a landmark 81 when I go there on a weekend.

✓ I take a photo of Landmark 81 when I go there on the weekend.

Use the indefinite article 'a photo' for one photo; 'Landmark 81' is a proper noun so does not need 'a' before it. Use 'on the weekend' (or 'on weekends') to indicate habitual action.

× I would like to visit the Sydney Opera House in Australia, umm, because this architecture of FA fascinate me a lot, Umm, I would also love to see the toilet Pagoda in Vietnam, it's very beautiful.

✓ I would like to visit the Sydney Opera House in Australia because its architecture fascinates me a lot. I would also love to see the One Pillar Pagoda in Vietnam; it's very beautiful.

Use possessive 'its' for 'architecture' and the verb must agree: 'fascinates' (third-person singular). 'Toilet Pagoda' seems a mistranslation; the common name is 'One Pillar Pagoda'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× Yes, of course I very enjoy to living in the tall building because umm I can't see the whole stunning views and enjoy the umm enjoy the the wings and uh the low trem temperatures.

✓ Yes, of course I would really enjoy living in a tall building because I could see the whole stunning view and enjoy the cool breeze and lower temperatures.

'Enjoy' needs 'would' or rephrase 'I really enjoy living' for tense consistency. Remove 'to' before 'living' (gerund required). 'Can't see' contradicts desire; use 'could see'. 'Views' to 'view' or 'the whole view'. 'Wings' unclear; likely 'breezes' or 'wind' so use 'cool breeze'. 'Low trem temperatures' is incorrect; use 'lower temperatures'. Ensure correct modal 'would' for hypothetical preference and correct gerund form.

× Definitely yes. Umm, I usually take the photos of building when I see the gorgeous building.

✓ Definitely, yes. Umm, I usually take photos of buildings when I see a gorgeous building.

No past participle needed here; main issues were article and plurality. Also add comma after 'Definitely' for natural speech. Ensure present simple for habitual actions.

× I take the photo of a landmark 81 when I go there on a weekend.

✓ I take a photo of Landmark 81 when I go there on the weekend.

Remove unnecessary 'a' before the proper noun and use 'the weekend' or 'on weekends' for habitual actions. Pronoun issue minimal but correction improves noun usage.