Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự câu, trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn; tránh từ lặp và lỗi từ (ví dụ: “Dear” không cần). Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với liên từ hợp lí.

Ví dụ: Yes. There is a very tall office building near my home. It belongs to a company and has many floors, so I often see lots of people coming and going during the day.

Gợi ý: Giảm tiếng ồ ừ, sửa thì và cấu trúc, tránh lặp từ 'usually' quá nhiều; nêu lý do cụ thể và thêm ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để logic hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I travel. I enjoy photographing different architectural styles because they remind me of the places I've visited and help me remember interesting details.

Gợi ý: Trả lời rõ ràng nêu tên hoặc vị trí tòa nhà, tránh nói lan man và sửa cấu trúc như 'I saw it on the internet'. Thêm lý do cụ thể tại sao muốn đến (kiến trúc, tầm nhìn, lịch sử).

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the tall building on High Street that I saw on the internet. It looks beautiful and impressive, and I want to see its architecture and the view from the top.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện lưu loát và hoàn thiện câu ý, tránh lặp từ và âm ồ ừ. Nên nêu một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi thêm 1-2 hỗ trợ với ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện ích, an ninh, tầm nhìn).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers wide views of the city and beautiful sunsets. Additionally, many tall buildings have good facilities and security, which I find convenient.

× Dear Tall buildings near my house is a very it's a very tall and and large because it's a company. So it's very, very light and I see many people who work there.

✓ There are tall buildings near my house. One building is very tall and large because it houses a company, so it is well lit and I see many people working there.

The original contains multiple sentence-structure and subject-verb agreement problems. Use 'There are' for existence of plural noun (singular/plural and there be issues). Break run-on fragments into clear sentences and use correct verb forms: 'houses a company' or 'is occupied by a company' and 'well lit' instead of 'very, very light'. Use 'working' (present participle) after 'people' to describe ongoing action. Suggestions: start with a clear existential phrase, keep one idea per sentence, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct participle forms.

× I usually take photos of buildings, uh, especially when I traveling to around A1 side. I usually take photos umm, because, uh, in the when I travel, I can see a lot of buildings, so I usually take them to rememories in this.

✓ I usually take photos of buildings, especially when I travel around the A1 area. I take photos because when I travel I can see a lot of buildings, so I usually take them to remember the trip.

The original used incorrect verb form 'traveling' after 'when I' (present simple required) and awkward phrasing 'to around A1 side'. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'when I travel'. Replace 'rememories' with 'remember' or 'to remember the trip'. Also remove filler words and fix article and preposition: 'around the A1 area' instead of 'to around A1 side'. Suggestions: use simple present for routines and choose correct nouns/verbs.

× Oh yes, I want to visit the building with in uh, which in on the high High Street because I, I shuffle the Internet. It's a beautiful buildings and very high. So it's it's also very large and I want to visit.

✓ Oh yes, I want to visit the building on High Street because I saw it on the Internet. It's a beautiful and very tall building, so it's also very large and I want to visit it.

The original misused prepositions ('with in', 'which in on') and had incorrect verb choice 'shuffle the Internet' instead of 'saw on the Internet'. Also plural/singular mismatch 'beautiful buildings' should be 'beautiful building'. Use 'on High Street' for location and 'saw it on the Internet' for how you learned about it. Suggestions: choose correct prepositions for location, use past simple 'saw' for completed action of viewing online, and match noun number with adjectives.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because in tall building I can see the overall views of my city, so I can see many beautiful landscape such as uh sunsets. I think it's a very it's.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because in a tall building I can see overall views of my city, so I can see many beautiful landscapes such as sunsets. I think it's very nice.

Missing articles: use 'a tall building' and 'in a tall building'. 'Landscape' as countable should be plural 'landscapes' or use 'scenery'. The sentence 'I think it's a very it's' is incomplete; replace with 'I think it's very nice.' Suggestions: include necessary articles before singular countable nouns, use correct pluralization, and finish sentences with a clear adjective or clause.