Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子不够完整，表达不流畅，信息较笼统。注意说出主题句后补充完整的支持细节，避免句子残缺；使用连接词使句子更连贯；用更具体的描述（如数量、位置、功能、感受）。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large shopping mall about five minutes away and several office towers along the main road. These buildings make the area feel busy and modern, especially during weekdays.

Gợi ý: 回答语法和词汇使用有误，句子断裂且不清楚。应直接回答并补充具体细节：说明喜欢拍哪类建筑、拍照的原因、拍照频率和用途，同时用连接词把信息连贯起来。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially historic ones. I enjoy capturing their architectural details and textures, and I usually post the best shots on social media a few times a month.

Gợi ý: 理由表述不清且句子结构有误。应给出清晰的主题句并用具体原因支持，使用连接词解释为什么想去（例如景观、文化或个人感受），并避免模糊词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is an iconic symbol of French culture and offers stunning views of the city. I have seen many documentaries and photos of it, so I would love to experience it in person.

Gợi ý: 回答基本清晰但有重复与小语法问题。可以更简洁自然地表达并补充具体细节（如楼层高度、喜欢的景色、夜间具体感受），使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views over the city are fantastic, especially at night. From a high floor I could see city lights and landmarks, which makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

× They make the area feel.

✓ They make the area feel lively.

原句缺少表语，句子不完整。应补充形容词或名词短语来描述“feel”的内容，例如“lively（生机勃勃）”。建议练习完整的主语+谓语+表语结构，使句意完整。

× I like to take photos of mother in the.

✓ I like to take photos of monuments.

原句“mother in the.” 语序和单词错误，可能是想写“monuments”。“monuments”为名词复数，符合复数建筑物。应注意单词拼写和句子完整性，检查听写或发音相似词导致的误写。

× Historical buildings and I often send it to social media.

✓ I often send photos of historical buildings to social media.

原句中主语和宾语位置混乱且代词“it”指代不明确。应把动作的执行者放前（I），并明确宾语为“photos of historical buildings”，代词应与复数名词一致（them），但更自然的表达是直接使用名词短语。建议理清主语、谓语、宾语顺序并确保代词与先行词数一致。

× Yes there is. I'd like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because I think it influential in the famous.

✓ Yes, there is. I'd like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because I think it is very famous and influential.

原句漏掉系动词“is”，且短语“in the famous”不合逻辑。需使用“is very famous and influential”来表达“它既出名又有影响力”。注意在形容词前加副词（very）或连接两个形容词并用连词。

× I often see it on TV too.

✓ I often see it on TV, too.

句子本身语法正确，但添加逗号更符合书面习惯，使副词“too”位置自然。解释：副词“too”通常放句末，前面可加逗号以示强调或并列。建议在书写中注意标点以增强可读性。

× Yes I do, because I think when I'm in a tall building the view of the top of the city is really fantastic.

✓ Yes I do, because I think when I'm in a tall building the view from the top of the city is really fantastic.

原句中介词短语“of the top of the city”不自然，应使用“from the top of the building”或“from the top of the city”。此处想表达从高处看到的景色，应使用“from”。建议复习常用介词搭配（view from / view of）。

× Especially in night, I usually feel comfortable.

✓ Especially at night, I usually feel comfortable.

介词使用错误，“in night”应为习惯用法“at night”。同时将强调词“Especially”放句首是可以的，但注意介词固定搭配。建议记忆常见时间介词短语（at night / in the morning / on Monday）。