Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and structure. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether tall buildings are near your home. Then give one or two specific supporting details (types of buildings, locations) using linking words. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Work on grammar: subject-verb agreement and correct nouns (e.g., ‘multinational companies’, ‘temples’, ‘gurdwaras’).

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, there are office towers that house multinational companies and a few modern apartment blocks along the main road. In addition, there are religious buildings such as a large temple and a gurdwara nearby, which stand out in the neighbourhood.

Gợi ý: Make your answer concise and coherent. Begin with a clear statement and then give a reason and one specific example. Use correct tense and simpler vocabulary to avoid confusion. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I like to capture memories of places I visit. For example, when I visited a new skyscraper last month I took several pictures and later posted them on Instagram to share with my friends.

Gợi ý: Clarify which building you mean and give two clear reasons why you want to visit. Avoid unrelated or confusing words. Use simple, correct sentences and linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Mention the building's name (e.g., Burj Khalifa) and specific attractions or experiences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing views from the observation deck. Also, Dubai has impressive architecture and luxury lifestyle attractions that I would like to experience.

Gợi ý: Provide a full sentence reply that directly answers the question, then add one reason. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to expand briefly. Avoid one-word answers.

Ví dụ: No, I would not want to live in a tall building because I prefer a quiet house with a garden. However, I can see the appeal for people who like city views and easy access to shops.

× Definitely they are low to buildings, tall buildings are near my home.

✓ There are many tall buildings near my home.

The original mixes singular/plural and word order awkwardly. Use 'there are' for existence of plural nouns and 'many tall buildings' to correctly express plurality and quantity. Also remove unnecessary words like 'they' and 'low to'.

× Firstly, like the private buildings, like the institution, multination companies are also associated and to talk about other buildings like temples and gurdwaras which are very tools and this type of the buildings are situated in my neuro home.

✓ There are private buildings and institutions, and multinational companies are also located nearby; there are also temples and gurdwaras in my neighborhood.

The sentence has incorrect adjective use ('multination' -> 'multinational'), wrong noun forms ('institution' should be plural if listing), and nonsensical words ('tools', 'neuro'). Reorganize into clear clauses and use correct adjectives and noun plurality. Use 'neighborhood' for location. Also avoid repeating 'like'.

× Yes, when I was in a very various new building, tallest building and I take photo and these pictures I post on a social platforms and where I got to post his phones and it's a good thing to capture the memory and I mostly take the pictures over during visiting the new place and new thing and new building.

✓ Yes, when I visit new or tall buildings I take photos, and I post these pictures on social media; I mostly take photos when I visit new places and buildings.

Mixed tenses ('was' with 'take') and incorrect word forms ('various new building', 'tallest building', 'post on a social platforms'). Use present simple 'visit' and 'take' for habitual actions. Use 'photos' and 'social media' (uncountable) and simplify repetition. Ensure verb tense consistency for habits.

× Yes, they are the way I have a dream to be missed that building it is so burglary fire is selected in in in Dubai and it's my dream to visit that place because it is a world famous and even child children can know about this building and usually experience a wealthy and rich lifestyles and it's.

✓ Yes, I have always dreamed of visiting the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is world famous; even children know about it, and visitors can experience a wealthy lifestyle there.

The original is ungrammatical and incoherent ('they are the way', 'to be missed', 'burglary fire is selected'). Identify intended meaning and restate clearly: use 'I have always dreamed of visiting', proper name 'Burj Khalifa', 'world famous' without article, and cleanly connect ideas. Correct plural 'child children' to 'children' and clarify 'experience a wealthy lifestyle'.

× Right.

✓ Yes, I would be open to living in a tall building.

Responding with 'Right' lacks a full sentence and does not directly answer the question. Provide a complete sentence with a modal or verb phrase to state preference. Match the question's tense and intent by using 'would be open to' or 'I want to' as appropriate.