Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say whether there are tall buildings near you, give a reason (e.g. residential area with bungalows), and mention where tall buildings are instead.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because the neighbourhood mainly consists of single-storey bungalows. However, you can find high-rises in the city centre, such as those in Lagos, which serve as commercial and residential towers.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add a reason and a brief example. Use natural collocations and specific vocabulary (architecture, façade, photogenic). Keep it to two–three sentences and use a linking word (because / for example).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy their architecture and details. For example, I like photographing old colonial houses and modern glass façades because their shapes and textures look very photogenic.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the building, correct vocabulary and grammar, and add a brief reason why you want to visit and when or how. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the building’s features or purpose.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Equity Towers in Lagos, which is one of the tallest buildings in Nigeria, because I want to see the city view from the top and observe its modern design. I hope to visit it next year when I have time.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer, correct grammar, and add one or two specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid vague phrasing and repetition. Mention practical reasons (views, facilities, location) and one supporting detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building if I can afford it because they usually have good facilities such as elevators and security. Also, living high up would give me a pleasant view of the city and reduce street noise.

× Unfortunately my area is made of bungalow houses so for tall building you can either find them in the city like Lagos in Nigeria but no.

✓ Unfortunately, my area is made up of bungalows, so you can only find tall buildings in the city, such as Lagos in Nigeria.

The original mixes singular and plural forms inconsistently ('bungalow houses' is redundant; use 'bungalows'). 'Made of' is unnatural for describing housing types—use 'made up of' or 'consists of'. 'For tall building you can either find them' has number agreement errors and unclear phrasing; correct to 'you can only find tall buildings'. Also add commas for clarity.

× Good job!

✓ (No correction needed.)

This phrase is acceptable in context as feedback and does not contain a grammatical pronoun error.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I do.

A single-word answer is grammatically acceptable but too brief for the task. Expanding to 'Yes, I do.' provides a fuller response matching the question 'Do you take photos of buildings?'.

× Yes, in my country there's equity and suits, one of the tallest buildings we have in my in Nigeria and I am planning to visit there as soon as possible.

✓ Yes, in my country there is Equity Suites, one of the tallest buildings in Nigeria, and I am planning to visit it as soon as possible.

The sentence has several structural issues: unclear noun phrase ('equity and suits' appears to be a misnaming of 'Equity Suites'), repeated preposition ('in my in Nigeria'), and incorrect pronoun/reference ('visit there' should be 'visit it' for the building). Reordering and correcting the building name and pronouns improves clarity and grammar.

× Of course, if I have to succeed the financial aid, living in a tall building is one of my dreams because when they definitely has the elevator.

✓ Of course. If I can afford it, living in a tall building is one of my dreams because they definitely have elevators.

The original has multiple problems: 'have to succeed the financial aid' is incorrect and unclear—use 'can afford it' or 'have enough money'. 'They definitely has the elevator' contains a third person singular error ('has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject 'they') and 'the elevator' is better as 'elevators' in general. Also split into clearer sentences.

× So I would love to stay in a building that is tall and attractive.

✓ So I would love to live in a tall, attractive building.

'Stay in a building that is tall and attractive' is understandable but wordy. 'Live in' is more appropriate than 'stay in' for a long-term residence. Also combine adjectives with correct order and a comma: 'tall, attractive'.