Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 応答は直接的で内容も明確ですが、文法と語彙の自然さを改善できます。具体的には、短い文をつなぐときに適切な句読点や接続詞を使い、表現の重複（"beautiful scenery" と "long distance views"）を整理しましょう。また “it's Tokyo Tower” の前に短い導入（"for example" や "such as"）を加えると流れが自然になります。さらに、語彙を少し広げて場所の特徴を具体的に述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes. For example, Tokyo Tower is quite close to my house. I often visit it with friends because it offers panoramic city views and a pleasant park nearby.

Gợi ý: 答えは分かりやすいですが、語彙の誤用（"specular" は不適切）や語の繰り返しを直す必要があります。接続詞で理由を明確に示し、具体的な撮影方法やお気に入りの構図を一つか二つ加えると内容が豊かになります。また文の数を制限し、冗長を避けましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph Tokyo Tower, especially at night when it's illuminated. The lighting makes it look spectacular, so I like to capture it from different angles, such as close-ups of the structure and wide shots that include the skyline.

Gợi ý: 内容は適切ですが、事実誤認と表現の不自然さを直しましょう（Sagrada Familiaは未完成ですので “completely recently” は誤り）。理由を述べるときは具体的な建築的特徴（塔、ファサード、ガウディの様式など）を挙げ、将来の計画を示す文はシンプルに保ってください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd love to visit the Sagrada Familia in Barcelona because of its unique Gaudí architecture, intricate facades and towering spires. I hope to study its details and take photos of both the interior light and exterior sculptures.

Gợi ý: 理由は明確ですが文法（冠詞の欠如 "a high-rise tower"、主語と動詞の一致）と表現の自然さを改善しましょう。追加で利便性や生活面の利点・欠点（交通、設備、防災など）を一つ述べると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because of the views. For example, a high-rise tower in Ariake offers beautiful ocean vistas that relax me after busy days, and many such buildings also have convenient facilities like gyms and shops.

× Yes, there is a notable tall building near my house, it's Tokyo Tower.

✓ Yes, there is a notable tall building near my house; it's Tokyo Tower.

The original uses a comma splice (two independent clauses joined with a comma). Use a semicolon or a conjunction to join independent clauses. Also 'notable tall building' is acceptable but adding a hyphen is optional; keep wording concise. Suggestion: use a semicolon or separate into two sentences.

× I often go there with my friends because it offers a beautiful scenery and long distance views.

✓ I often go there with my friends because it offers beautiful scenery and long-distance views.

Use uncountable 'scenery' without 'a'. 'Long-distance' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective modifying 'views'. Remove the article 'a' before 'beautiful scenery' and add hyphen between 'long' and 'distance'.

× Lighting makes it look specular, spectacular, and I often take photos of different angles.

✓ The lighting makes it look spectacular, and I often take photos from different angles.

'Specular' is uncommon and likely incorrect here; 'spectacular' is appropriate. Add 'The' before 'lighting' for clarity and use 'from different angles' rather than 'of different angles'. Also avoid comma splice by using 'and' correctly.

× It is very famous for its unique architecture and it was completely recently.

✓ It is very famous for its unique architecture and was completely renovated recently.

'Was completely recently' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning likely uses past participle 'renovated' or 'completed' plus adverb 'recently'. Use 'was completely renovated recently' or 'was completed recently' depending on meaning.

× For example, high rise tower in Ariyake offers beautiful ocean views that makes me feel relaxed after busy days.

✓ For example, a high-rise tower in Ariake offers beautiful ocean views that make me feel relaxed after busy days.

Add the article 'a' before 'high-rise tower'. Use hyphen 'high-rise'. 'Views' is plural so the relative clause should use plural verb 'make' not 'makes'.