Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, any any), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, explain the setting and why tall buildings are absent.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a natural valley surrounded by hills and forests, so the area is mainly low-rise houses and open land.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and improve grammar and word choice. Use linking words to add a reason or frequency. Remove repetitions and use correct verb forms (e.g., ‘take photos’ not ‘take the picture of that’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit big cities. I especially like photographing skyscrapers because their shapes and lights make interesting memories.

Gợi ý: Be more precise and confident. Begin with a clear topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two specific reasons why you want to visit. Avoid hesitation phrases like 'I don't know' and incorrect words (bedding → building).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Shanghai Tower in Shanghai. I want to see its observation deck and enjoy panoramic views of the city because I’ve seen photos of its modern design.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and a coherent reason. Use simple, correct sentences and provide specific details about what you prefer instead (e.g., a house in the countryside, reasons like quiet, fresh air). Avoid unclear phrases and extraneous words.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building. I prefer living in the countryside in a small house because I like quiet surroundings, fresh air, and being close to nature.

× No, there's definitely no any tall building near my house because I live in the kind of valley, uh, natural valley surrounded by any natural landscape.

✓ No, there are definitely no tall buildings near my house because I live in a natural valley surrounded by natural landscape.

The sentence misuses 'there's' (there is) with a plural noun and includes 'no any' which is ungrammatical. Use 'there are' for plural 'tall buildings' and use either 'no' or 'any' but not both. Also repeat of 'natural' is reduced and 'the kind of' is informal and unnecessary. Suggestion: say 'I live in a natural valley surrounded by natural landscape.'

× Yes, if I want to the any any big cities surrounded by tall building, I just take the picture of that and I keep that to memory.

✓ Yes, when I visit big cities with tall buildings, I take pictures of them and keep them as memories.

The original shows multiple issues but based on allowed list, focus on incorrect verb forms and usage: 'want to the any any' is incorrect and 'surrounded by tall building' uses singular; 'I just take the picture' should be 'I take pictures' for habitual action and 'keep that to memory' should be 'keep them as memories'. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'when I visit... I take...'. Also correct plural agreement for 'buildings' and pronouns.

× Yes, definitely. There is a bedding that I would like to visit if I have chance there and is, I don't know what it is called, but I think it may be Shanghai Tower. Yeah, that is in Shanghai.

✓ Yes, definitely. There is a building I would like to visit if I have the chance, and I think it might be the Shanghai Tower in Shanghai.

The sentence uses incorrect word 'bedding' instead of 'building' and has awkward pronoun and clause structure ('if I have chance there and is, I don't know what it is called'). Correct pronoun use and articles: 'the chance' and 'it might be the Shanghai Tower.' Also combine clauses for clarity and remove redundant 'Yeah, that is in Shanghai.'

× No, I definitely don't want to live in any tall building at all because I'm a kind of person like who wants to live in the nature as my whole time. When to live wise around that by Nectar and for us.

✓ No, I definitely don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer living in nature all the time.

The original contains many pronoun and phrasing errors: 'a kind of person like who' is incorrect; 'live in the nature' should be 'live in nature'; 'as my whole time' is ungrammatical. The final fragment 'When to live wise around that by Nectar and for us' is unclear and should be removed or rewritten with clear meaning. Suggestion: express preference simply: 'I prefer living in nature.'