Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise, correct small grammar issues, and add one specific detail to sound natural. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are a few tall apartment towers about a 10-minute walk from my home, and I can see them from my balcony. One of them has shops on the ground floor, so I often go to the supermarket there at weekends.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure, avoid repetition (e.g., "I do"), and use linking words for coherence. Limit to 3–4 sentences and add one specific example of a building or architectural feature you like.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially interesting or historic houses because they look beautiful and tell a story. For example, I like capturing old façades with ornate windows when I travel around the city, since I'm studying architecture and want to learn from different styles.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid vague phrases like "the whole beautiful experience." Use linking words to compare or prioritize, and give one specific reason for choosing each landmark. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: I would love to visit the Taj Mahal because of its stunning architecture and historical significance. I also hope to see the Eiffel Tower in Paris, mainly to enjoy the panoramic city views from the top.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar errors (e.g., "huger play" unclear), avoid repetition, and present two clear reasons with linking words. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a concrete image of the preferred home.

Ví dụ: I wouldn't prefer to live in a very tall building because they can be crowded and noisy, and I dislike waiting for elevators. Instead, I prefer a small house near a mountain where I can enjoy quiet, fresh air and more mental peace.

× They're about 10 minutes walk away and I can see them from my balcony and one of them has shops on the ground floor for example.

✓ They're about a 10-minute walk away, and I can see them from my balcony; one of them has shops on the ground floor, for example.

Use 'a 10-minute walk' (hyphenated compound adjective with singular article) and add commas for clarity. '10 minutes walk' is ungrammatical; use 'a 10-minute walk' or 'ten minutes' walk'. Also separate clauses with appropriate punctuation to improve sentence structure.

× I sometimes go to supermarket in that building at weekends.

✓ I sometimes go to the supermarket in that building on weekends.

English requires the definite article 'the' before 'supermarket' when referring to a specific place. Use 'on weekends' (American) or 'at weekends' (British) consistently; here 'on weekends' is natural. Also include 'the' for specificity.

× I do take photos of buildings sometimes I find interesting and architecture and old houses worth photographing because they look beautiful and tell a story.

✓ I do take photos of buildings sometimes; I find interesting architecture and old houses worth photographing because they look beautiful and tell a story.

Run-on sentence: two independent ideas need separation (semicolon or period). Also reorder to 'interesting architecture' (adjective before noun) and remove extra 'and' before 'architecture'.

× And you know I want to be an architect in future so I have fascination in this.

✓ And you know I want to be an architect in the future, so I am fascinated by this.

Use 'in the future' or better 'in the future' with article 'the'. 'Have fascination in this' is incorrect; use 'be fascinated by' or 'have a fascination with' followed by the object. Also adjust tense to 'am fascinated' to express current state.

× Yeah, some places I want to visit, like I would like to visit Taj Mahal.

✓ Yeah, some places I want to visit, for example, I would like to visit the Taj Mahal.

Use definite article 'the' before 'Taj Mahal' in English. Also 'for example' fits better than 'like' when listing.

× I think it will be the greatest visit of my life.

✓ I think it will be the greatest visit of my life.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'visit' is awkward when referring to the experience; consider 'experience' instead: 'I think it will be the greatest experience of my life.' No strict correction required.

× And for example, I want to see the whole beautiful experience.

✓ For example, I want to experience the whole beauty of it.

Awkward phrasing 'see the whole beautiful experience' — better to say 'experience the whole beauty' or 'see the whole thing' depending on intended meaning. This clarifies noun usage and collocation.

× Well I actually wouldn't prefer to live in a very tall building.

✓ Well, I actually wouldn't prefer to live in a very tall building.

Comma after opener improves clarity. 'Wouldn't prefer' is slightly odd; native speakers say 'I wouldn't prefer to' or better 'I wouldn't want to live in a very tall building.' Not required by list but suggested improvement.

× I feel like huger play and silent places and tall buildings can be noisy and crowded and they don't enjoy waiting for elevators for example.

✓ I feel like huge, busy, and noisy places and tall buildings can be crowded, and I don't enjoy waiting for elevators, for example.

Original has wrong words: 'huger play and silent places' is meaningless. Likely intended 'huge, busy, and noisy places'. 'They don't enjoy' is incorrect pronoun for speaker; use 'I don't enjoy'. Use commas to separate adjectives and clauses.

× I prefer a small house near a mountain.

✓ I prefer a small house near a mountain.

This sentence is correct grammatically. No change needed.

× I feel like it gives me mental peace and mental contentment I want.

✓ I feel like it gives me the mental peace and contentment I want.

Include definite article 'the' before 'mental peace', remove repeated 'mental' before 'contentment', and reorder to 'contentment I want' with proper noun phrase. Adds natural phrasing.