Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + thông tin bổ sung), sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ, chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'there are many tall buildings', 'it is noisy', 'air pollution is bad'). Dùng liên từ đơn giản để kết nối ý (for example, because).

Ví dụ: Yes, I live in a large city, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a cluster of office towers and several high-rise apartment blocks within a ten-minute walk. However, this also means it can be quite noisy and the air quality is often poor because of traffic.

Gợi ý: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (seldom, don't have a good camera, shy about photographing people). Nên nêu lý do rõ ràng và một ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I seldom take photos of buildings. I don't have a good camera, and I also feel shy taking pictures where people live because I worry about invading their privacy. If I did take photos, I would focus on architectural details like facades or interesting balconies.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và lạc đề. Bạn nên nêu một tòa nhà cụ thể (ví dụ: museum, skyscraper), lý do muốn thăm (architecture, view, history) và một chi tiết cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (e.g., 'I would like to visit...', 'it takes a long time').

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the city’s main museum because it has a famous modern architecture and several galleries I haven't seen. I’m especially interested in the rooftop observation deck, which reportedly offers great views of the skyline.

Gợi ý: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ hơn: trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi nêu 2 lý do cụ thể, sửa ngữ pháp (live in a tall building, watch people, invite friends). Tránh cụm từ mơ hồ như 'join my atmosphere' — hãy nói rõ hoạt động (host gatherings).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building in the future because I enjoy city views and the sense of being above the busy streets. Also, a high-rise apartment would be convenient for hosting friends, as it offers more space and a pleasant view during social gatherings.

× Now I'm living in a mega city so there are many tall building near Spaiphore.

✓ Now I live in a mega city, so there are many tall buildings near Spaiphore.

Use simple present to describe a permanent situation (I live) and correct plural for countable noun (buildings). Improve punctuation and article usage.

× But it is it is very uncomfortable for me because it's noise and it's air pollution very bad.

✓ But it is very uncomfortable for me because the noise and air pollution are very bad.

Remove repetition and reorganize sentence: use definite article with noise/air pollution when referring to specific problems, and use correct adjective order (are very bad) with plural subject.

× To be honest, I seldom take photos of buildings near my hometown because I'm I don't I don't have a good good camera to taking this and I'm very shy to see their life in this building.

✓ To be honest, I seldom take photos of buildings near my hometown because I don't have a good camera to take pictures, and I'm too shy to photograph people's lives in those buildings.

Remove redundant contractions and words, use correct verb forms (don't have, to take), and use appropriate phrasing for photographing people (too shy to photograph). Also correct plural/reference (those buildings).

× To be honest that using buildings that I would like to visit because I I find it's very inconvenient to go to the first floor to the higher floor, it take many time.

✓ To be honest, there are some buildings I would like to visit, but I find it very inconvenient to go from the first floor to the higher floors because it takes a long time.

Clarify meaning and fix sentence structure: introduce subject (there are some buildings), correct verb agreement (it takes), correct plural (floors), and use natural time expression (a long time).

× To be honest, I want to live in two building in the future because I want to see the city views and watching people and sometimes I can invite friends to join my atmosphere to in to enhance their relationship.

✓ To be honest, I want to live in two buildings in the future because I want to see the city views and watch people, and sometimes I can invite friends to join me to strengthen our relationships.

Use plural for buildings, use infinitive to match 'want' (watch), correct phrasing for inviting friends (join me), and use natural expression for improving relationships (strengthen our relationships).