Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid fillers (uh, umm) and incorrect plurals. Use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home in Adair Town. For example, there are several high-rise apartment blocks and a large shopping mall within a five-minute walk, which makes the area feel very busy.

Gợi ý: Give a clear reason and one specific example; fix grammar (plural/singular, verb forms). Use a linking word to connect reason and example and keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because they remind me of places I have visited. For example, when I travel to a new city I photograph interesting facades and later I look at these pictures to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence naming the building and state one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and hesitations. Correct tense and phrasing (I would like to visit the A1 building because it is a famous library in Karachi).

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the A1 Building, which houses a large public library in Karachi, because it is famous for its historic architecture and extensive collection of books. I think visiting would help me learn more about the city's history and enjoy the quiet reading spaces.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer about your preference or current situation, then add one specific detail. Fix grammar (present simple, articles) and remove unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes. I already live in a tall building; my apartment is on the fourth floor of a large block. Because it is convenient, I can easily walk to shops and public transport nearby.

× 'Yes uh, near to my home there is a lot of tall buildings.'

✓ 'Yes, near my home there are a lot of tall buildings.'

'There is' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun "tall buildings"; use 'there are' for plural. Also remove unnecessary preposition "to" after "near" and add commas for clarity.'

× 'I live in Adair Town and there is a very uh, tall malls, big days and uh, different umm, mods are.'

✓ 'I live in Adair Town, and there are very tall malls, big stores, and different modes.'

'There is' is incorrect with plural nouns like "malls"; use 'there are'. Also many words are unclear: "big days" likely "big stores", and the sentence needed parallel list structure and punctuation.'

× 'Uh yes, I take photos of buildings because when I see a different buildings then I'll take a picture for memories and I love to taking pictures because it create a new memory for me and when I have a free time then I watch these photos.'

✓ 'Yes, I take photos of buildings because when I see different buildings I'll take pictures for memories, and I love taking pictures because they create new memories for me. When I have free time I look at these photos.'

'Different buildings' should not have 'a' before a plural noun. Use 'taking' instead of 'to taking' after 'love'. Subject-verb agreement: 'they create' (plural) not 'it create'. Use 'free time' without 'a' and 'look at' is more natural than 'watch' for photos.'

× 'Uh, yes uh, there is A1 building, uh, I would like to visit that was uh, uh, library.'

✓ 'Yes, there is the A1 building; I would like to visit it because it is a library.'

'There is' can be used for singular 'building' but the sentence is disfluent. Replace 'that was' with 'it is' to match present reference. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'A1 building' for specificity.'

× 'It was located, it would be located in uh, in Karachi city because this, this, this is a very big and very famous building.'

✓ 'It is located in Karachi because it is a very large and famous building.'

'Was located' and 'would be located' mix past and conditional; use present tense 'is located' to state location. Use consistent present-tense verbs and simpler phrasing.'

× 'Yes, I am living in a tall building like I am living in a apartment and my apartment in the 4th floor and there it is a very big building and I use the leave the farm, go to the go to.'

✓ 'Yes, I live in a tall building. I live in an apartment on the fourth floor. It is a very large building.'

'Am living' is acceptable but 'I live' is more natural for permanent residence. Use the article 'an' before 'apartment'. Use 'on the fourth floor' not 'in the 4th floor'. The final fragment is unclear ('I use the leave the farm...') and should be omitted or rewritten with clear meaning.'