Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện độ tự nhiên, ngữ pháp và rõ ràng. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh lỗi số ít/ số nhiều (people thay vì human), và sửa kết cấu câu hỏi cuối cùng không cần thiết. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về khoảng cách hoặc loại tòa nhà để làm phong phú nội dung. Ví dụ cụ thể: “There are several high-rise residential blocks about five minutes' walk from my house.”

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. I live in Hanoi city centre, and several high-rise apartment blocks and office towers are within a ten-minute walk. For example, a modern residential complex with shops on the ground floor is just two blocks away.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, sử dụng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn khi từ chối, và giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Dùng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng (e.g., however, but). Tránh cụm từ trực dịch như 'take a picture in the sky' — nói 'take photos of the skyline' hoặc 'take pictures that include buildings'.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not really into photography, so I don't usually take pictures of buildings. However, when I take photos of the skyline or the city from a high point, the tall buildings often appear in the background.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ý chính: trả lời câu hỏi trực tiếp là nói về một tòa nhà bạn muốn thăm, nhưng hiện tại sinh viên nói về mong muốn sở hữu — cần làm rõ hoặc trả lời cả hai. Sửa ngữ pháp (want to own/ buy) và cấu trúc câu. Thêm lý do cụ thể vì sao muốn thăm hoặc sở hữu một tòa nhà (kiến trúc, tiện ích, vị trí).

Ví dụ: Rather than visiting, I would like to own a building one day. For instance, I'd love to own a small mixed-use building in Hanoi with a café on the ground floor and apartments above, because it would provide a steady income and a comfortable place to live.

Gợi ý: Trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (Yes/No) rồi giải thích. Sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (live with my family; I want to own a room in an apartment; avoid double negation 'don't not'). Thêm chi tiết ngắn về lý do (sự riêng tư, tiện nghi, vị trí).

Ví dụ: I have always lived with my family in a house, so I haven't lived in a tall building yet. In the future, I would like to own a small apartment in a high-rise because it would give me more independence and be closer to my workplace.

× I live in a big city capital Hanoi, so the number of the human in this city is big.

✓ I live in the capital city, Hanoi, so the population of this city is large.

The original sentence has awkward structure and wrong word choices: 'big city capital Hanoi' should be 'the capital city, Hanoi'; 'the number of the human' is incorrect — use 'population'; 'is big' is unnatural for population, use 'is large'. Improve by using a natural noun phrase and correct collocations (population + large).

× Around my home there are many tall building and apartment for service.

✓ Around my home there are many tall buildings and service apartments.

Incorrect singular/plural forms: 'many' requires plural nouns ('building' -> 'buildings'). 'apartment for service' is awkward; 'service apartments' or 'apartments for service' is better. Ensure noun agreement with quantifiers.

× The amount of this big human?

✓ What is the population of this city?

This fragment is ungrammatical and unclear: 'The amount of this big human?' is incorrect word order and word choice. Use a proper question form 'What is the population of this city?' to ask about number of people.

× No, I am not a photographer and also I don't like take a photo too.

✓ No, I am not a photographer and I don't like taking photos either.

Incorrect verb form after 'like': must use gerund 'taking'. 'too' at sentence end is colloquial; 'either' is more appropriate in negative sentences. Also remove redundant 'also'.

× But when I take a picture in the sky, there will see many tall building and apartment in this photo too.

✓ But when I take a picture of the skyline, many tall buildings and apartments also appear in the photo.

Use 'take a picture of the skyline' rather than 'in the sky'. 'there will see' is ungrammatical; use 'many... appear' or 'can be seen'. Plural nouns required. 'too' -> 'also'. Maintain correct verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× MMM I want to owner a building than like to visit a building.

✓ Hmm, I would rather own a building than just visit one.

Wrong word 'owner' (noun) used instead of verb 'own'; 'than like to visit a building' is ungrammatical. Use comparative structure 'would rather ... than ...' and correct verb forms.

× There are many tall building and apt.

✓ There are many tall buildings and apartments.

Plural forms needed after 'many': 'building' -> 'buildings', 'apt.' should be 'apartments'. Use full word in formal speech.

× I want to own buy this and own myself is better than visit in it and do nothing.

✓ I want to buy and own one instead; owning it myself is better than just visiting and doing nothing.

Mixed verbs 'own buy' incorrect; choose 'buy and own'. 'own myself' is incorrect reflexive use; 'own it myself'. 'visit in it' wrong preposition—use 'visit it'. Reorder for clarity and naturalness.

× From the past to now, I am the man who live with my family in a house, not a tall building, an apartment.

✓ Until now, I have been living with my family in a house, not in a tall building or an apartment.

Tense and aspect: 'From the past to now' -> 'Until now' and use present perfect continuous 'have been living' to express an ongoing situation. Subject-verb agreement: 'I am the man who live' -> 'I am the man who lives' or better rephrase. Also prepositions: 'in a house, not in a tall building or an apartment.'

× But in the future I want to owner one room in a apartment owner myself and don't not live in my family.

✓ But in the future I want to own a room in an apartment and live by myself, not with my family.

Use correct verb 'own' instead of 'owner'. Article: 'a apartment' -> 'an apartment'. Double negation 'don't not' is wrong; use 'not'. Phrase 'owner myself' incorrect—use 'by myself' or 'on my own'. Ensure future intention expressed with 'I want to' plus base verbs.