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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Actually there are not any tall building near my home. Near my home building maybe the highest is the floor because we are the poor area.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yes, I am very like to take photo of buildings anytime because I am a architecture students, I take photo of them and to my mind to my device.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

I really want to go to a European capital. They are godful. They are higher. How beautiful.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

No, in my country have a lot of earthquake so I don't want to live in a tall building. I prefer to live in a small house there who has big ground.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 您需要提高语法准确性并使回答更自然、简洁。可先直接回答问题,然后用一到两句具体说明位置和原因,避免冗长或不通顺的表达。注意单复数和冠词(例如:'there aren't any tall buildings','the tallest building has only a few floors'),并控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. The tallest building nearby is only about three or four storeys high because this is a low-income residential area. So the skyline here is mostly low and spread out.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 需要提高语法和词汇使用,使表达更自然且条理清晰。先直接回答(Yes/No),然后说明原因和频率,使用正确的职业身份和动词形式(例如:'I really like taking photos','I'm an architecture student'),避免模糊表述如 'to my mind to my device'。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like taking photos of buildings because I'm an architecture student. I often photograph interesting facades and details and store them on my phone for future reference and study.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更具体并使用正确词汇表达感受。应先明确想去的具体建筑或城市,然后给出理由并用连接词衔接。避免使用不正确或不清晰的词(如 'godful'),改用 'magnificent'、'historic' 或 'impressive'。控制在一到三句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Notre-Dame Cathedral in Paris because it's a magnificent historic building with stunning Gothic architecture and intricate details that I want to study up close.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 需要改进语法和表达逻辑。先直接回答,然后给出清晰具体的原因和偏好细节。注意句子结构、时态和词汇搭配(例如:'There are many earthquakes in my country, so I wouldn't want to live in a tall building','I prefer a small house with a large yard')。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because earthquakes are common in my country and I feel safer in a single-storey house. I prefer a small house with a large yard where I can relax and grow some plants.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Actually there are not any tall building near my home.

Actually there are not any tall buildings near my home.

句子中主语为複数(there are),名词应使用复数形式。将 building 改为 buildings。建议:当用 there are / not any 表示“没有……(复数)”时,后面的名词要用复数形式。

Sentence structure errors

× Near my home building maybe the highest is the floor because we are the poor area.

Near my home, the tallest building might be only a few floors because we live in a poor area.

原句句子结构混乱,比较级和名词顺序错误。需要把地点状语和主句分开,使用比较级 'tallest' 表示最高的建筑,并用 'might be only a few floors' 更自然。'we are the poor area' 应改为 'we live in a poor area' 或 'it is a poor area'。建议:注意主语、谓语和修饰语的正确顺序,使用合适的形容词形式和动词表达状态。

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, I am very like to take photo of buildings anytime because I am a architecture students, I take photo of them and to my mind to my device.

Yes, I really like to take photos of buildings anytime because I am an architecture student; I take photos of them and save them on my device.

错误包括动词短语、名词复数、冠词和句子结构:'am very like' 应为 'really like';'photo' 应为复数 'photos';'a architecture students' 冠词和单复数错误,应为 'an architecture student';'and to my mind to my device' 意思混乱,应改为 'and save them on my device'。建议:使用正确的固定搭配(like + to-infinitive 或 like + -ing),注意冠词 an 用于元音音素开头的词,名词单复数一致,表达“保存到设备”用 save on。

Sentence structure errors

× I really want to go to a European capital.

I would really like to visit a European capital.

原句可接受,但在对话中更自然的表达是 'would like to visit'。将 'want to go to' 改为更礼貌的 'would like to visit',保持时态和语气。建议:在表达愿望时,根据语境选择更自然的固定表达。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× They are godful.

They are wonderful.

'godful' 不是标准英语单词,可能想表达 'wonderful' 或 'godlike'。在描述城市或建筑美丽时用 'wonderful' 更合适。建议:使用常见形容词,避免造词。

Comparative and superlative errors

× They are higher.

They are taller.

'higher' 可用但描述建筑高度更常用 'taller'。另外单句缺少比较对象,独立使用时可说 'They are taller'(比其它建筑更高)或 'They are tall'。建议:根据语境选择 'tall'、'taller' 或 'tallest',并在需要时补充比较对象。

Sentence structure errors

× How beautiful.

How beautiful they are!

片语 'How beautiful.' 不完整,口语中通常说 'How beautiful they are!' 来构成完整感叹句。建议:用完整句式表达感叹。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, in my country have a lot of earthquake so I don't want to live in a tall building.

No. In my country there are a lot of earthquakes, so I don't want to live in a tall building.

句子缺少主语和正确的 there be 结构,应为 'there are a lot of earthquakes',且 earthquake 需用复数。建议:描述存在时用 there is/are;注意可数名词单复数。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer to live in a small house there who has big ground.

I prefer to live in a small house there that has a big yard.

原句中 'who' 不用于指代房子,且 'big ground' 用法不自然,应改为 'a big yard' 或 'a large piece of land',并加上定冠词或不定冠词。建议:用 'that' 或 'which' 指物;表示庭院或土地用 yard/plot/land。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
PoorPoverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
TallIn height; Demanding
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