Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'Exodus', 'tail').

Ví dụ: Yes, there are some tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large library and a school in a multi-storey building nearby, so I visit them often. Because they are close, I can walk there in ten minutes.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain why with specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'when' and avoid vague phrases such as 'take a new data'. Keep it to two or three clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I visit a place for the first time. I do this because I want to remember the details and the atmosphere, and later I use the photos to share the experience with my friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and add a specific reason and detail. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid redundant phrases. Mention what you would do there or what interests you about the building.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it is the tallest building in Vietnam and offers amazing city views. I hope to go to the observation deck and take photos of the skyline at sunset.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a concise reason and one supporting detail. Use correct phrases (e.g., 'I have a fear of heights') and avoid filler sounds like 'um' or repeated words.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. I prefer a house in a neighborhood where I feel more comfortable and closer to the street level.

× Well, Exodus the different tail buildings near my home and I often visit it as I get a library in my country and there also was school.

✓ Well, there are several tall buildings near my home, and I often visit them because I have a library and a school nearby.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and word order and missing/incorrect verbs, making it ungrammatical (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'Exodus the different tail buildings' is meaningless; replace with 'there are several tall buildings'. Use plural 'them' to refer to multiple buildings. Use 'because' to show reason and correct nouns 'library' and 'school' with 'nearby'. Maintain present simple tense for habitual action.

× You know that they it's actually is actually a tall building is.

✓ You know, they are actually tall buildings.

The original repeats verbs and pronouns and has wrong verb forms, causing a sentence structure error (Type 26). Use a simple clear clause 'they are actually tall buildings'. Remove redundant words 'it's' and extra 'is'.

× If I have an experience with that building, I will take a lot of photos to remember my mind to take a new data about this experience.

✓ If I have an experience with that building, I will take a lot of photos to remember it and to record new information about the experience.

Problems include awkward noun choices and incorrect verb forms (Type 8). 'Remember my mind' is incorrect; use 'remember it'. 'Take a new data' is uncountable and wrong verb; use 'record new information'. Keep conditional structure 'If I have..., I will...' in future.

× That definitely I really want to visit Landmark 81 in the future, you know that it's actually widely known as the tallest building in Vietnam and I really want to have a chance to visit this and take a picture with this higher views.

✓ I definitely want to visit Landmark 81 in the future; it is widely known as the tallest building in Vietnam, and I would like the chance to visit it and take pictures from the high views.

Original sentence has redundancy, incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing (Type 26). Reorder to 'I definitely want to visit...' Use 'it' for the building, 'take pictures from the high views' or 'take pictures from the high viewpoint'. Use 'would like the chance' for polite desire and plural 'pictures'.

× Well, I've, I have a fear of height, so you know that I'm actually want to live in a, a house that surround surrounded by some neighborhoods.

✓ Well, I have a fear of heights, so I actually want to live in a house surrounded by other homes in a neighborhood.

Mixing present perfect 'I've' with present simple and wrong noun form 'height' vs 'heights' creates tense and noun errors (Type 6). Use 'I have a fear of heights' (common expression) and 'surrounded' as past participle adjective. Use singular 'a house' and 'neighborhood' for clarity.

× Umm, so I, I don't think I want to live in the tall building.

✓ So I don't think I want to live in a tall building.

The original has extra filler words and incorrect article 'the' before a general noun (Type 26). Remove repetitions and use 'a tall building' for a non-specific building.