Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct contradictions, use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide specific details. Start by directly answering, then give 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Check grammar (articles, plurals, and word order) and avoid unclear phrases like “wrongly homes.”

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home because I live in a small, peaceful city. For example, most houses here are one or two storeys, and the area feels quiet and residential. Therefore, I prefer low buildings rather than high-rise blocks.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer, then explain what attracts you using specific examples and linking words. Remove repetition and improve word choice (e.g., “attracted to” → “appeal to me,” “modifications” or “architectural details”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when their design appeals to me. For instance, I enjoy photographing façades with colourful murals, unusual windows, or interesting balconies because these details make the building visually striking.

Gợi ý: Answer directly naming the building, then give clear, specific reasons to visit. Use linking words (for example, because, since) and correct vocabulary (e.g., “architectural building” → “a notable building” or give the building’s name). Avoid vague words like “curiosity building.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the architect-designed town hall in Apukara because it has a striking curved façade and large glass atrium. I’m curious to see the interior layout and the decorative details that make it unique.

Gợi ý: Give a clear one-sentence opinion, then provide 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, because or so). Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid fillers. Explain practical reasons (stairs, noise, lifestyle) concisely.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I dislike using lifts and prefer easy access to the outdoors. For example, a two-storey house suits me better since it is more convenient and feels quieter.

× No, there are tall buildings near my home because my home city is small and peaceful city.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home because my hometown is a small and peaceful city.

The sentence incorrectly uses plural 'are tall buildings' without negation and repeats 'city'. Also 'home city' is nonstandard; 'hometown' fits. Added 'no' to match intended meaning and used singular article 'a' before 'small and peaceful city'. Suggestion: add 'no', replace 'home city' with 'hometown', and include the article 'a'.

× It is small and my home is located in a peaceful area.

✓ It is small, and my home is located in a peaceful area.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but needs a coordinating conjunction with a comma for clarity. The error is punctuation/structure rather than verb form; adding the comma improves readability. Suggestion: join clauses with ', and'. (Matches present tense context.)

× It where there is one to two floor wrongly homes.

✓ There are one- or two-floor houses there, though some are in poor condition.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear vocabulary ('wrongly homes'). Reordered to start with 'There are' and use plural 'houses' for count; 'one- or two-floor' is the correct modifier. Clarified 'wrongly' as 'in poor condition'. Suggestion: use 'There are' for existence and place modifiers before nouns properly.

× I like.

✓ I like it.

Sentence lacks an object; 'I like' is incomplete without specifying what is liked. Adding 'it' refers back to the previously mentioned houses. Suggestion: include the object or a clause ('I like living there').

× I don't like tall buildings by the way.

✓ I don't like tall buildings, by the way.

Grammatically correct aside from punctuation; added comma for natural speech flow. No verb agreement error with 'I'. Suggestion: use a comma before the parenthetical phrase.

× Yes, I like to take photos of buildings where they are more attractive, attracted to me, like different kinds of poster or different kinds of modification in that building.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of buildings that I find attractive, such as those with different posters or architectural modifications.

Original mixes relative clauses and passive forms incorrectly. Use 'that I find attractive' to express personal attraction. 'Different kinds of poster' should be 'different posters', and 'modification in that building' is better as 'architectural modifications'. Suggestion: use active constructions and correct plural forms.

× I like to I like to take photos.

✓ I like to take photos.

Repeats the phrase unnecessarily. Simplify to a single occurrence. Suggestion: avoid repetition for conciseness.

× Otherwise I don't like to take buildings photos.

✓ Otherwise I don't like to take photos of buildings.

Incorrect word order 'buildings photos' should be 'photos of buildings'. Use the preposition 'of' to link the noun and its subject. Suggestion: use 'photos of buildings' or 'building photos' as a compound noun.

× As there is a building I like, I like to visit that is our architect building where it is located in Apukara.

✓ There is a building I like that I would like to visit: an architectural building located in Apukara.

Original sentence has awkward order and redundancy. Use 'There is a building I like that I would like to visit' or 'I would like to visit an architectural building located in Apukara.' 'Architect building' is nonstandard; use 'architectural building'. Suggestion: simplify and place modifiers next to the nouns they describe.

× It is like a U safe building.

✓ It is shaped like a U and is very sturdy/safe.

Phrase 'U safe' is unclear; likely meant 'U-shaped' and 'safe'. Use the adjective 'U-shaped' and separate safety as 'safe' or 'sturdy'. Suggestion: use standard adjective forms such as 'U-shaped' and a clear adjective describing safety.

× It is so big and curiosity building and I like to visit there.

✓ It is very big and an interesting building, and I would like to visit it.

'Curiosity building' is incorrect; 'interesting' or 'curious' as adjective fits. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for formality and 'visit it' rather than 'visit there'. Also add article 'an'. Suggestion: use correct adjectives and proper pronouns/objects.

× No, I don't prefer to live in a tall buildings because I don't like, you know, high buildings places like we should.

✓ No, I don't prefer to live in tall buildings because I don't like high-rise places.

Mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buildings'; remove 'a' when using plural. 'High buildings places like we should' is unclear; replace with 'high-rise places'. Suggestion: ensure agreement between article and noun number and use standard terms like 'high-rise'.

× Uh, it is.

✓ Uh, it isn't suitable for me.

Fragment 'It is.' is incomplete. Provide a full clause to convey meaning; likely intended negative. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and complete the thought.

× It doesn't help me to up and downs in a lift or something.

✓ It doesn't help me to go up and down in a lift or anything like that.

'Up and downs' is incorrect pluralization; use 'up and down'. Also use infinitive 'to go up and down' and 'a lift' is fine, but add 'go' for clarity. Suggestion: use standard expressions 'go up and down' and 'anything like that'.

× I like to be in a 2 two floor building.

✓ I prefer to live in a two-floor (two-story) building.

'2 two' repeats the number; use either numeral or word, not both. 'Be in' is less natural than 'live in' or 'prefer to live in'. Use 'two-floor' or 'two-story'. Suggestion: use words for numbers under ten in formal writing and standard building terms.

× It will be suitable for me and easy.

✓ It would be more suitable and convenient for me.

'Will be' should be 'would be' to express preference hypothetically; 'easy' is vague—'convenient' is better. Suggestion: use conditional 'would' for preferences and choose more precise adjectives.