Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조와 문법을 정리하고 어휘 선택을 개선하세요. 예를 들어 복수형(s) 사용과 관사(a/the) 사용을 확인하고, 한두 문장으로 깔끔하게 핵심을 전달한 뒤 추가 정보는 연결어로 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 구체적으로는 'there are many tall buildings near my home'처럼 주어-동사 일치를 바로잡고, 'for example' 다음에 구체적 사례를 간결히 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, several of them house cafes and restaurants, so I often go there to relax and meet friends.

Gợi ý: 문장을 더 자연스럽고 정확하게 연결하세요. 'when I go to other countries' 같은 표현에서 관사 제거와 어순을 고치고, 연결어를 사용해 이유를 명확히 말하세요. 중복(so it is. Inspiring for me, so...)을 피하고 한 번에 이유를 제시하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel to other countries because I find different architectural styles inspiring and they remind me of the places I've visited.

Gợi ý: 건물 이름과 이유를 명확하고 정확한 문장으로 말하세요. 망설임(uh)은 줄이고 'want to go to'와 'go to the top of the building' 같은 올바른 전치사를 사용하세요. 또한 건물명은 정확하게 발음하거나 표기하도록 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Lotte World Tower in Jamsil because it is the tallest building in Korea, and I would love to go to the observation deck to enjoy the city view.

Gợi ý: 의사를 분명히 표현하고 이유를 간결하게 구성하세요. 현재 답변은 의미 전달이 불분명하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'I don't want to live in a tall building'으로 시작해, 전력이나 엘리베이터 고장 같은 구체적 이유를 연결어(because, so)로 설명하세요. 또한 반복과 어색한 표현을 피하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I worry about elevators breaking down, and climbing many stairs would be exhausting for me.

× Yes, around my home there are so many tall building.

✓ Yes, around my home there are so many tall buildings.

The noun 'building' should be plural after 'so many' which requires a countable plural noun. Use 'buildings' to match 'so many'. Suggestion: use 'so many' + plural noun (e.g., 'so many tall buildings').

× For example, the building is filled with a various cafe or restaurant, so I enjoy using the facilities.

✓ For example, the area is filled with various cafes and restaurants, so I enjoy using the facilities.

'a various' is incorrect because 'various' is a determiner that does not take 'a'. Also 'cafe or restaurant' is singular and mismatched with 'various'. Use plural nouns 'cafes and restaurants' and a more appropriate subject 'area' or 'neighborhood'. Suggestion: remove 'a' and make nouns plural when describing multiple places.

× Yes, when I go to the other countries I see a new type of building.

✓ Yes, when I go to other countries I see new types of buildings.

With general habitual actions use simple present; remove 'the' before 'other countries' and pluralize 'type of building' to 'types of buildings' to match plural 'countries' and general observation. Suggestion: use plural forms for general statements and omit unnecessary articles.

× So it is. Inspiring for me, so I take a photo of buildings.

✓ I find them inspiring, so I take photos of buildings.

Original fragments 'So it is. Inspiring for me' are sentence fragments and awkward. Combine into a complete sentence: subject 'I', verb 'find', object 'them' or 'the buildings'. Also pluralize 'photo' to 'photos' for habitual action. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use full clauses.

× Yes, I want to go uh, Tamsil Rutte Tower.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Tamsil Rutte Tower.

Add the preposition 'to' before a place verb 'go to'. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: use 'go to + place' structure.

× It is the highest building in Korea, so I want to go top of building.

✓ It is the highest building in Korea, so I want to go to the top of the building.

Use the preposition 'to' with 'go', include the definite article 'the' before 'top' and 'building' to refer to a specific building. Correct phrase: 'go to the top of the building'. Suggestion: use 'go to the top of the [building]'.

× No, I don't want to leave a tall building because when it. Don worked. I can't lift on there, so it's so tired for me.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because if the power goes out, I can't get by there easily, so it would be tiring for me.

Multiple errors: 'leave' should be 'live' (wrong verb), sentence fragments 'when it. Don worked.' are nonsensical likely intended 'when it doesn't work' or 'when the power goes out'. 'lift on there' is incorrect; use 'get by there' or 'move around there' and 'so it's so tired for me' should be 'it would be tiring for me'. Suggestions: use 'live in' for residence, express conditional 'if the power goes out', and use appropriate verbs for movement and state (e.g., 'get around', 'be tiring').