Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, word order), avoid repetition, and add one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my hometown. For example, there is a 25-storey residential tower which is the tallest in the area, and a nearby office called Workout Foundation that also occupies a high-rise. Together, they dominate the skyline.

Gợi ý: Make your answer fluent and grammatically correct. Remove filler sounds, use plural/singular correctly, and give a specific example of what you photograph and why. Use a linking word to explain the reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially those with unusual designs. For instance, there is a local landmark with bright, colorful walls that I find very attractive, so I like to capture its patterns and textures for my collection.

Gợi ý: Be concise and natural. Give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons, and avoid fillers. Mention who you would go with and what you would do there for added detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris. It is famous worldwide, and I want to go with my family to enjoy the views from the top and take some memorable photos.

Gợi ý: Use natural phrasing and avoid repetition. Give one clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Correct collocations like 'top floor' or 'top of the building'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because living on the top floor would give me excellent views of the surrounding scenery, especially at sunrise and sunset.

× Yes, there are numerous buildings nearby my hometown.

✓ Yes, there are numerous buildings near my hometown.

Use of the preposition 'nearby' as an adverb/adjective is incorrect with 'my hometown' here; 'near' is the correct preposition for location. This is categorized under article/preposition contexts in this list (22). Suggestion: use 'near' for locations (e.g., 'near my hometown').

× The first is 25 flats tall building that is a towering in my locality.

✓ The first is a 25-flat tall building that towers in my locality.

Original mixes singular/plural and article use: '25 flats' should be '25-flat' as a compound adjective modifying 'building'; 'a towering' is incorrect because 'towering' here should be a verb or adjective without 'a'. Also need the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: form compound adjectives with hyphens and match noun number (e.g., 'a 25-flat building' or 'a 25-flat-tall building'); use 'that towers' or 'which is towering'. This fits singular/plural and related article issues (1,22).

× Moreover, one office name is Workout Foundation.

✓ Moreover, there is an office called Workout Foundation.

The original word order and article/pronoun usage are incorrect. Use 'there is' + 'an office called' to introduce the office name. This is a 'there be' and article/pronoun usage issue (3 and 22); here corrected to clear noun phrase introduction. Suggestion: say 'there is an office called...' or 'one office is called...'. Note: returned under article error category per instructions.

× It has the tallest building in.

✓ It has the tallest building in the area.

The phrase 'in' at the end is incomplete; a location object is required. Add 'the area' (or 'the locality/region') to complete the prepositional phrase. This is a sentence structure/preposition omission problem (26 and 11). Suggestion: always complete prepositions with their object (e.g., 'in the area').

× Yes, I often take photos of building, specially those are, uh, differently, uh, build up.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially those that are built differently.

Multiple issues: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' because speaking generally; 'specially' should be 'especially'; 'those are, uh, differently, uh, build up' is ungrammatical — use 'those that are built differently' where 'built' is the past participle describing the buildings. This covers plural issues (1), adverb choice (13), and incorrect verb form needing past participle (9 and 10). Suggestion: use clear relative clause: 'those that are built differently'.

× I clearly know that one of the famous building near my locality, uh, has colorful uh, walls that are more, more attractive than anything.

✓ I know that one of the famous buildings near my locality has colorful walls that are more attractive than anything.

Errors corrected: remove filler 'clearly' which is unnecessary; 'building' should be plural 'buildings' because 'one of the' requires a plural noun; remove extra commas and repetitions; 'more, more attractive' simplified to 'more attractive'. This is primarily plural agreement (1) and adjective/adverb misuse (13). Suggestion: use 'one of the famous buildings' and avoid repetition and fillers.

× Yes, there is a building I would like to visit in my future.

✓ Yes, there is a building I would like to visit in the future.

Use 'in the future' instead of 'in my future'. 'In my future' is unnatural in this context. This is a 'there be' and prepositional phrasing issue (3 and 11). Suggestion: say 'in the future' or 'someday'.

× Uh, that building name is Eiffel Tower that is famous worldwide and that is my dream to visit there with my loved ones to explore that building and click some, uh, special pics.

✓ That building's name is the Eiffel Tower; it is famous worldwide, and it is my dream to visit it with my loved ones to explore and take some special photos.

Multiple pronoun and article issues: 'that building name is' should be 'that building's name is' or 'the building is called'; add definite article 'the' before 'Eiffel Tower'; use 'visit it' rather than 'visit there'; 'click some...pics' is informal — use 'take some photos'. This covers incorrect pronoun and article use (12 and 22). Suggestion: use 'its'/'it' correctly and include articles for proper nouns (the Eiffel Tower).

× Yes, I definitely want to live in a tall building because I personally believe that if I live in top of the story, I can clearly visualize, visualize and view the scenic surroundings.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to live in a tall building because I believe that if I live on the top floor, I can clearly see and enjoy the scenic surroundings.

Problems: 'in top of the story' is incorrect prepositional phrase — correct is 'on the top floor' or 'at the top of the building'; repeated 'visualize' is redundant and 'visualize and view' is awkward — use 'see and enjoy' or 'view'. This involves modal/tense framing and preposition errors (4 and 11). Suggestion: use 'on the top floor' and simpler verbs like 'see' or 'enjoy'.